Correction orthographique de ma synthèse en Anglais

Publié le 6 avr. 2017 il y a 6A par Anonyme - Fin › 9 avr. 2017 dans 6A
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Sujet du devoir

The power

Introduction:

Power refers to two things, first thing, there is the physical power, physical strength, to be strong like Hulk, Superman or a sportsman.
The second thing is about the power that a man can have on people, it refers to intelligence (like Benjamin Franklin, whe was an inventor and became President of the United States).
To be powerful means to have a psychological influence on other people, to decide for them, or help them (like Martin Luther King) last also sometimes to control or kill them (like Lord Voldemort).
Is power good or not for a person ?
It in hard to define power as a positive or a negative thing.
The question is: was Malala Yousafzai when she said “When the whole world is silent, even voice becomes powerful”.

Développement:

Indeed, we can have two points of view about the notion of power, firstly the positive point of view, and then the negative point of view.
First of all let's see the good side of the thing which is “that power is good”, let's take the example of Muhammed Ali, is an American boxer. He changed his name of Cassius Clay Jr for Muhammed Ali, converted to islam in one thousand nine hundred seventy five, in Berlin, in two thousand and five, he received the peace medal, on behalf of the United Nations for his commitment to the movement against segregation. He was decorated in two thousand and five with the Presidential Medal of Liberty, the highest civilian honor in the US.
He reached an incredible notoriety as an athlete thanks to his religious and political positions.

But sometimes, power can be corrupted by dishonest people being hungry for power.
Let's take the example of Lord Voldemort, the character of the Harry Potter saga written by J.K Rowling.
Lord Voldemort is the main villain of the story, he is a sorcerer with considerable power, he tries to take power to change the world according to his wishes.
Rowling describes Lord Voldemort as a person whese only ambition is to become all-powerfull and ommortal. He believes that he is superior to everyone.
Rowling also stated that Lord Voldemort is “incredilly lager for power”.

Conclusion:

So yes, Malala was right when she said “when the whole world is silent, even one voice becomes powerful”, because that one voice represents the voice of the person who has the power.
This person with have the power to influence positively or negatively a lot of people in the whole world. And if it works, the person can spread peace if the influence is positive or war if the influence is negative.




3 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 6 avr. 2017

The power

Introduction:

Power refers to two things, first thing, there is the physical power, physical strength, to be strong like Hulk, Superman or a sportsman.
The second thing is about the power that a man can have on people, it refers to intelligence (like Benjamin Franklin, he was an inventor and became President of the United States).
To be powerful means to have a psychological influence on other people, to decide for them, or help them (like Martin Luther King) last??(ta phrase ne veux rien dire avec ce verbe..) also sometimes to control or kill them (like Lord Voldemort).
Is power good or not for a person ?
It is hard to define power as a positive or a negative thing.
The question is: was Malala Yousafzai (tu as oublié un mot je pense non?) when she said “When the whole world is silent, even voice becomes powerful”.

Développement:

Indeed, we can have two points of view about the notion of power, first the positive point of view, and then the negative point of view.
First of all let's see the good side of the thing which is “that power is good”, let's take the example of Muhammed Ali, an American boxer. He changed his name of Cassius Clay Jr for Muhammed Ali, converted to islam in nineteen seventy five, in Berlin, in two thousand and five, he received the peace medal, on behalf of the United Nations for his commitment to the movement against segregation. He was decorated in two thousand and five with the Presidential Medal of Liberty, the highest civilian honor in the US.
He reached an incredible notoriety as an athlete thanks to his religious and political positions.

But sometimes, power can be corrupted by dishonest people being hungry for power.
Let's take the example of Lord Voldemort, the character of the Harry Potter saga written by J.K Rowling.
Lord Voldemort is the main villain of the story, he is a sorcerer with considerable power, he tries to take power to change the world according to his wishes.
Rowling describes Lord Voldemort as a person whese only ambition is to become all-powerfull and immortal. He believes that he is superior to everyone.
Rowling also stated that Lord Voldemort is “incredilly lager for power”.

Conclusion:

So yes, Malala was right when she said “when the whole world is silent, even one voice becomes powerful”, because that one voice represents the voice of the person who has the power.
This person have the power to influence positively or negatively a lot of people in the whole world. And if it works, the person can spread peace if the influence is positive or war if the influence is negative.

Anonyme
Posté le 6 avr. 2017

Merci à toi !

Anonyme
Posté le 6 avr. 2017

Power refers to two things, first thing, there is the physical power, physical strength, to be strong like Hulk, Superman or a sportsman.
The second thing is about the power that a man can have on people, it refers to intelligence (like Benjamin Franklin, he was an inventor and became President of the United States).
To be powerful means to have a psychological influence on other people, to decide for them, or help them (like Martin Luther King) last also sometimes to control or kill them (like Lord Voldemort).
Is power good or not for a person?
It in hard to define power as a positive or a negative thing.
The question is: was Malala Yousafzai when she said “When the whole world is silent, even voice becomes powerful”.
Développement:
Indeed, we can have two points of view about the notion of power, firstly the positive point of view, and then the negative point of view.
First of all, let's see the good side of the thing which is “that power is good”, let's take the example of Muhammed Ali, is an American boxer. He changed his name of Cassius Clay Jr for Muhammed Ali, converted to Islam in one thousand nine hundred seventy five, in Berlin, in two thousand and five, he received the peace medal, on behalf of the United Nations for his commitment to the movement against segregation. He was decorated in two thousand and five with the Presidential Medal of Liberty, the highest civilian honor in the US.
He reached an incredible notoriety as an athlete thanks to his religious and political positions.
But sometimes, power can be corrupted by dishonest people being hungry for power.
Let's take the example of Lord Voldemort, the character of the Harry Potter saga written by J.K Rowling.
Lord Voldemort is the main villain of the story, he is a sorcerer with considerable power, he tries to take power to change the world according to his wishes.
Rowling describes Lord Voldemort as a person whose only ambition is to become all-powerful and immortal. He believes that he is superior to everyone.
Rowling also stated that Lord Voldemort is “incredibly lager for power”.
Conclusion:
So yes, Malala was right when she said “when the whole world is silent, even one voice becomes powerful”, because that one voice represents the voice of the person who has the power.
This person with having the power to influence positively or negatively a lot of people in the whole world.And if it works, the person can spread peace if the influence is positive or war if the influence is negative.

voila :)


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