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Imagine the conversation between Adam's mother and father when they receive the message "Just stay quiet and all safe" and they find out their son is missing.Je n'ai pas encore terminé mais pouvez vous me dire si j'ai fais des fautes sil-vous-plait.
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After reading the message " Just stay quiet and all safe" ..." What is this ... this this message Mike ?
Leave me reflect please Tia, it's so strange !
I know Mike but ...
BUT WHAT ?
Must to act, ME TOO I KNOW CRY MIKE ! QUESTION OF MY SON ! MY SON, my baby, my life ...
He is also my son, you know that ?
I'm sorry, I'm so worried ! What is the meaning of the message in your opinion ? Why Adam is absent ? Where is he ?
I don't know ! In this picture, it happens that is Adam, look !
T think Adam is implies in the suicide of his classmate ! That time, it's was really strange.
I also think is implies in this story but i don't believe he did anything wrong !
You think he saw his friend to commit suicide ?
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àmon avis tu n'as pas fais de fautes j'éspére que tu auras juste à ton devoir bonne chance ;)
Bonjour Ilyana7,
Voici ton text corrigé:
"After reading the message:
"Just stay quiet and you'll be safe"...
"What is this... this, this message Mike?
Let me read please Tia, it's so strange!
I know Mike but...
BUT WHAT?
Should we do somthing? ME TOO I KNOW CRY MIKE! QUESTION OF MY SON! MY SON, my baby, my life...(je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire par là)
He is also my son, you know that?
I'm sorry, I'm so worried! What is the meaning of the message in your opinion? Why isn't Adam here? Where is he?
I don't know! In this picture, it happens to be Adam, look!
I think Adam is implied in the suicide of his classmate! That time, it's was really strange.
I also think it implies in this story but I don't believe he did anything wrong!
You think he saw his friend commit suicide?
I don't think it was a suicide! I think he saw maybe what happened.
It's possible, but what got done? I want to find my son!"
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
Voici ton text corrigé:
"After reading the message:
"Just stay quiet and you'll be safe"...
"What is this... this, this message Mike?
Let me read please Tia, it's so strange!
I know Mike but...
BUT WHAT?
Should we do somthing? ME TOO I KNOW CRY MIKE! QUESTION OF MY SON! MY SON, my baby, my life...(je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire par là)
He is also my son, you know that?
I'm sorry, I'm so worried! What is the meaning of the message in your opinion? Why isn't Adam here? Where is he?
I don't know! In this picture, it happens to be Adam, look!
I think Adam is implied in the suicide of his classmate! That time, it's was really strange.
I also think it implies in this story but I don't believe he did anything wrong!
You think he saw his friend commit suicide?
I don't think it was a suicide! I think he saw maybe what happened.
It's possible, but what got done? I want to find my son!"
Cordialement,
Benjamin CNED 3ème
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