Expression écrite en anglais

Publié le 22 nov. 2018 il y a 23 jours par ELFF - Fin › 25 nov. 2018 dans 20 jours
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Sujet du devoir

 

What kind of adventure would you be ready to embark on and why? You may choose one of the three types of adventure illustrated bellow.

- SPACE EXPLORATION

- POLAR EXPEDITION

- UNDERWATER EXPEDITION

 

QUELQU'UN POURRAIT IL ME DIRE SI IL Y A DE GROSSES ERREURS ?

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

 

I would be ready to embark on for all of these expeditions. Although, I think that the space exploration is the most amazing. During a space exploration we can visit others planets or satellites such as March or Moon. Moreover, you can see our planet in real dimensions and not just on your books or a map.  Space exploration, contrary to Polar and underwater explorations, is scientifically an exploration to explain the theories like Big Bang or about Universe. In my opinion, space explorations are more interesting than two other expeditions, given that we have less information and data about this environment. Therefore, this experience has a dangerous side but she is exciting.

 

Space adventure could be really great since astronauts are compared by people like Heroes. For example Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin became world celebrities after their space travel. Pictures about their explorations are published in lot of newspapers.

 

May be it is my kid’s mind that give me a reason to prefer space exploration. Space adventure remember me cartoons, movies and series such as atomic Betty, star wars and the 100. I loved them! So, that will be incredible if can I enter into my favorite film.

 

When I was a child, I loved to customize me thus; I could wear an astronaut combination. I think a combination is very heavy and I would like to try to wear her because I        am curious.

 

This exploration could be a silence moment without city noises such as cars motor, people who screaming, children who crying or again, planes and trains. We could stay long of pollution.




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cachou34600
cachou34600
Posté le 22 nov. 2018

I would be ready to embark on for all of these expeditions. Although, I think that the space exploration is the most amazing. During a space exploration we can visit others planets or satellites such as March or Moon. Moreover, you can see our planet in real dimensions and not just on your books or a map.  Space exploration, contrary to Polar and underwater explorations, is scientifically an exploration to explain the theories like Big Bang or about Universe. In my opinion, space explorations are more interesting than two other expeditions, given that we have less information and data about this environment. Therefore, this experience has a dangerous side but (she) is exciting. (à enlever)

 

Space adventure could be really great since astronauts are compared by people to Heroes. For example Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin became world celebrities after their space travel. Pictures about their explorations were published in lot of newspapers. 

 

May be it is my kid’s mind that give me a reason to prefer space exploration. Space adventure remembers me cartoons, movies and series such as atomic Betty, star wars and the 100. I loved them! So, that will be incredible if  I could enter into my favorite film. 

 

When I was a child, I loved to customize me thus; I could wear an astronaut spacesuit. I think a spacesuit is very heavy and I would like to try to wear it because I        am curious. 

 

This exploration could be a silent moment without city noises such as car motors screaming people, crying children , planes and trains. We could stay far from pollution.

ELFF
ELFF
Posté le 23 nov. 2018

Merci infiniment !

- ELFF


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