La notion Mythes et Héros dans la réussite professionnelle

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour tout le monde ! 

Etant donné mon niveau frôlant l'excellence en anglais (LOOL) et la détresse dans laquelle m'a laissé ma professeur d'anglais, j'aurais vraiment besoin d'une petite relecture pour corriger mes erreurs de grammaire, conjugaisons etc.. 

Voici ce que je compte préparer à l'oral pour la notion Mythe et Héros dans la réussite professionnelle, merci d'avance ! ;) 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

The notion I will present is "Myths and Heroes", particulary regarding moving up. 

Indeed we will talk about successful people who start from scratch and had to give the best of themselves to fulfil his dreams. That's why they became mythicals icons and influenced people's careers. 

And we tried to answer the following question "How can myths and heroes influence people's careers?" 

To answer the question I have chosen 3 documents 

First, I will try to present a self made woman: Oprah Winsley who had a mythical creer is starting from scratch. Then, I will to show the influence that a man, by his work, can practise: it's about Steve Jobs. And finally, I will to talk about Robin Olds, who followed the tracks of this father and became a famous pilot during the second world war. 

First, I will talk about one of the most influential person in the USA. She from Missisipi and was born during the segregation. Its is about the famous presenter of a talk show Oprah Winfrey. Indeed she moved slowly to the top.
She started from scratch and overcame the obstacles of being an African American girl during the segregation, and now she has a media empire (TV, channel, radio, magazine...).
And once at the top, you become a philanthropist and give back for public good. Indeed she illustrates the myth of the self-made woman and become a symbol of American dream for blacks peoples.

Then, I'm going to talk about Steve Jobs. As Oprah, he knew a difficult course. He was an orphan and he was adopted by a lower middle class family. He dropped out from school and he didn't graduate from university. He had nothing to succeed, he start from scratch too. But he managed to revolutionize the world of the computing. He developped mobile phones, computers or still touchpads. We can say that he managed to make the most of this stills to make it to the top and earn many money. He became one of the biggest fortunes of the world. He is a source of admiration and success in the eyes of the whole world. And his inventions continue to inspire scientists and to accompany millions of users. 

To finish, I will analyse Robin Old's career. He is an example that we can be inspired by our family and friends. Indeed, he followed the tracks of his fathers who was a famous pilot too. He passed on his passion and influenced his career. We can talk about social reproduction. 

To conclude, we can say that more the ascent is precarious and more the myth becomes impressive. Because it gives us hope and open fields of the possibilities. They draw us upwards.