Spaces and exchanges

Publié le 22 avr. 2017 il y a 7A par Anonyme - Fin › 26 avr. 2017 dans 6A
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Bonjour je passe mon oral de bac d'anglais dans quelques jours et j'aimerais avoir des avis sur ma notion et pouvoir corriger mes fautes. Pour ce travail je me suis aidé des documents vu en cours (images, textes, vidéos etc..)

Merci d'avance !!

 

 

 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Spaces and exchanges


I am going to speak to you about the notion “spaces and exchanges”. A space it’s a place which can be defined by its people, the language they speak, the traditions they have, the customs they share, the historical events they have gone through. The exchanges is the idea of leaving something behind for a new start or to discover something different. So we can ask ourselves what impact can global cities have on people’s everyday live ?  For answer at this question we will use 3 documents as a newspaper article from The NY Time by Wayne Arnold entitled Modern Singapore and another article from cities of migration by Singh entitled Urban Diversity with a picture.

 


Firstly, the article speak about Mr Lee who is an important person on Singapore, he help the country become modern and develop after its independence. He led Singapore for 31 years and died in march 2015. But it was also on critical person. Some people said he was a dictory because he control the media, suppresse free speech, he persuaded some people of the well being of putting some limits and they didn’t free to open a firm. But he rest a world figure because it’s and international political and financial leader. With him, Singapore is an economic powerhouse with one of the world’s highest power capital comes and high quality schools, health and public service.

 


Moreover, the document speak about the diversity at Singapore.There is a message written in different language. The peoples come from India, Malaysia, Indonesia, China, Thailand, many immigrants come from heightbouroug. Immigrants come to find a better life, for the job. The urban concentration creates opportunities to be exploited. We can find many skills with people of different origins. They occupe jobs like “bus drivers”, factory workers, domestic or construction workers.

 


Then, the document which is an internet article from cities of migration is too about Singapore. This article have a picture with a tee-shirt, in the middle of it, there is six rules about the cities : “you are forbidden to smoke” or “you are not allowed to spits.” Otherwise you may be charged a fine up to $1.000. This strict code of conduct has been created for appear like a solution to the problems in order to create cleaner and healthier urban spaces.

 


To conclude, we can consider that the globalization have a massive role in terms of exchange, she is enriching and thank’s so that we can open our spirit and learn full of new culture. Indeed, thanks to new tool such as internet for example can be share all around the world in a very short time.

 




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2017

Bonjour,

Premier paragraph

I am going to talk to you about... the notion of...

the exchange ou  x exchanges

to answer this question

 

Second

The article describes ( un article ne peut  pas parler )  Mr Lee who is an important person in Singapore, he helped ( passé ) modernize and develop this country after it gained its independence... But he was also criticized. People say that he was a dictator....suppressed.... He persuaded people to set limits and to not open a firm. But he stays  an important figure because he's an international political and financial leader. Thanks to him....

 

Troisième

The document explains the diversity of Singapore... different languageS.

Neighboring countries. ( pays voisins ).

They work in ( occupe ) jobs like....

 

Quatrième

Is about Singapore... This article  has  ( singulier ) ou These articles have ( pluriels )

There are ( pluriel )  six rules.... to SPIT ( verb à l'infinif )

TO appear

 

Dernier

globalization HAS  ( singulier )

IT is enriched  ( pas de pronom féminin pour les objets )...thanks to the culture that has opened our hearts and taught ( appris ) us so much... such as the internet...for exemple that can be share... In a very short amount of time.

 

Ceci est très bien sinon. Good luck!


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