Synthèse en Anglais

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Bonjour , j'ai fait mon devoir sur la synthèse de la notion Myths and Heroes et je voulais savoir s'il n'y avait pas de fautes car j'ai un niveau assez faible en anglais , s'il vous plaît et merci d'avance pour votre aide . 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voilà ma synthèse sur la notion myths and heroes:

We talked of the notion Myths and Heroes through differently examples like singers , actors or actress etc ...

We will to answer at the question : What the heroes brings at the world and at the people , and what the Myths ?

Firstly , today there are moderns heroes like Usain Bolt that is a olympic athlete that run much and often , like Bill Gates the most sucessful housnessman in the world . There are others examples of moderns heroes who are all actors or actress , singers , athletes and stars . Every one think differently the world and every one try to climp up the social ladder . The myths explains the origins of humaity . To my mind all the persons see differently the world and every one dream to have a job , to have a dream job , and climp up the social ladder , but every persons have a liking for jobs differently and they aspire to have a glittering job like a game tester for example , actor or actress , player basket ball and for others they want be for example librarian ....They yearn to earn much money and succeed in life . They yearning to become celebrities and to be in the limelight . Personally my dream job would be to be actress but I don't can to do this job because I am shy and I don't can play a role in public . I prefer to intend to be a Spanish teacher because I like Spanish . As for the myths are present in Literature , in Art ... 

Moreover the heroes influence the young people , the new generation and these do part of history , of a culture and they we show the world differently , they we learn much of things and fight for equal rights sometimes like Gandhi who is a freedom symbol . And finally there are actors and actress like Daniel Graig who is the man who plays James Bond , like Emma Watson an actress who plays in Harry Potter and who plays the role of Hermione Granger . There are also authors and film-makers like J.K Rowling the author of Harry Potter and writer and like Steven Spielberg a film-maker . And finally there are singers like Katy Perry who is an american singer . All this persons are moderns heroes . In Literature there are of the fancy and heroes invented and who have for goal to save the world and the persons . It's a story of fiction where the hero can search a thing , who is a legend in the story like for example the sword Excalibur . And the hero or the heroes in the story have a dream and a hope for the future like in the reality . The heroes are also these who have fought for the Liberty , the peace ... in the world like the soldiers that have fought for the peace in the world .

Finally the heroes are part of history , of culture , some of them are know for theirs talents , human qualities , theirs skills , theirs jobs and have an influence on the young people .

We can conclude what the heroes are part of culture , of history ...And they are able to influence the young people and to show them the way at follow . And the myths are part of humanity and shows the reality .