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Bonjour,
J'ai un oral en anglais sur le thème Spaces and Exchanges et j'aimerais que quelqu'un me la lise pour savoir si j'ai fais des fautes et si l'oral est interresant, s'il vous plait.
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I will introduce the notion Spaces and exchanges. First of all, I would like to give a definition of this notion: this is the idea of giving and receiving something else in return and also with the places where these exchanges happen. The exchange can appear on many forms: trade, information, tourism and relationships but I will talk about the immigration. We may wonder what are the different forms of integrations when migrating to a new country. Firstly, I’ll talk about education. Then, the integration thanks to work and finally the adaptation to culture.
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Bonsoir,
I will introduce ( la formulation est grammaticalement correcte mais cette phrase est généralement plus appréciée de l'examinateur : I'm going to deal with the notion Spaces and exchanges. First of all, I would like to give a definition of this notion: this is the idea of giving and receiving something else in return, ( => different flows that create relationships between differents spaces ) pour remplacer cette partie : and also with the places where these exchanges happen. The exchange can appear on have many forms: trade, information, tourism and relationships but I will talk about the immigration. We may wonder ( le nous n'existe pas en anglais ; en français il s'agit d'un nous collectif ou d'un nous de magesté ( Nous Henri III, roi par la grâce de Dieu … ) Tu peux le remplacer par une autre formule : It will be interesting to wonder … ) what are the different forms of integrations when migrating to a new country. Firstly, I’ll talk about education. Then, the integration thanks to work and finally the adaptation to culture.