Vegan: a trend or a real way of life?

Publié le 16 avr. 2018 il y a 5 mois par TOZTown - Fin › 19 avr. 2018 dans 5 mois
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Bonjour à tous, alors voilà j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger et valider mon devoir d'anglais! J'ai tout fais j'aurais besoin de vous pour corriger les éventuelles fautes et erreur grammaticales.

Merci d'avance!

Voilà mon devoir:

The vegan trend is becoming more and more popular. The rejection of animal suffering, the food crisis and environmental concerns are at the root of this way of life. A trend that is not only food but a real way of life.

Vegetarian, vegan, vegan?
Between food scandals and environmental concerns, some people have decided to adopt a diet or even a way of life where meat and animal products are banned. The vegetarian diet, vegan, vegan ... Let's take stock.
- Vegetarian: no animal flesh, ie meat, fish and shellfish.
- Vegan: no animal flesh but no animal products such as dairy products, eggs, honey ...
- Vegan: no animal flesh, no animal product but no animal products: vegans do not wear fur, leather, wool, do not buy cosmetic or household products containing animal material and has been tested on animals. A way of life that does not allow them to go to shows exploiting animals (zoo, circus, bullfighting …)

 

Vegan, a way of life in its own right
Living by refusing to consume all products from the animal world, this is the way of life of vegans. This English vegan or veganism term was coined in 1944 from the word vegetarian. It refers to both a diet but also a way of life. It is not only a choice of health or ecological, it goes even further: an ethical choice, moral or even political. Vegan is therefore based on the refusal of animal exploitation. They represent only 1% of vegetarians, and their lifestyle is much more environmentally friendly than other veggie trends. Their way of life seems to be very difficult to adopt in a world where consumption takes all its rights, a world where the culinary trend is at its peak, and where fashion and beauty reign.

 

Focus on vegan cosmetics
The vegan trend extends to cosmetics: ban on animal testing and animal ingredients in products. The vegans are very attached to the organic cosmetics, which is clearly visible on the side of the animal defenders. Even if organic cosmetics remain a niche market, more and more brands are attentive to the demands and expectations of vegans. Many brands are no longer testing animals (The Body Shop), but this does not prevent them from using animal ingredients such as beeswax or lanolin (wool fat). This last criterion does not correspond to the lifestyle of vegans. Some prescribed ingredients are replaced by alternative ingredients: beeswax by different mixtures of vegetable waxes, idem for lanolin.

Being vegan, a trend for one and a way of life for others. For some, it is difficult to understand how it works, incompatible with today's way of life. Many blogs and books offer recipes and other tips for those who are tempted by the lifestyle of vegans

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger des erreurs grammaticales!!!

Merci d'avance




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cachou34600
cachou34600
Posté le 16 avr. 2018

 

A trend that doesn't concern only food but that means a real way of life.

- Vegan: no animal flesh, no animal product but no animal products: (là je n'ai pas compris ce que tu veux dire ?)

do not buy cosmetic or household products containing animal material and which have been tested on animals.

Compte tenu du niveau de ton texte tu ne devrais pas avoir besoin de corrections grammaticales, fais attention à ne pas présenter un truc trop ambitieux qui serait en décalage avec ton niveau d'anglais réel quand tu vas t'exprimer librement sans ton texte préparé, sauf si tu parles très bien anglais bien sûr ce que je te souhaite 

 

TOZTown
TOZTown
Posté le 16 avr. 2018

Merci pour votre réponse pour vegan ce que je voulais dire c'est: pas de chair animale, c’est-à-dire la viande, le poisson et les crustacés. 

cachou34600
cachou34600
Posté le 16 avr. 2018

Vegan: no animal flesh, no animal product but no animal products: Ce que je ne comprends pas c'est la répétition de deux fois la même chose, ça n'a pas de sens ? C'est du traducteur automatique ?

Donc ça donne :

no animal flesh, and no animal products: vegans do not wear fur, leather, wool, do not buy cosmetics or household products containing animal material and has been tested on animals.

TOZTown
TOZTown
Posté le 16 avr. 2018

D'accord je comprends mieux merci Cachou. Voyez vous d'autres erreurs dans mon devoir ?

cachou34600
cachou34600
Posté le 16 avr. 2018

non pour moi c'est bon

bon courage

TOZTown
TOZTown
Posté le 17 avr. 2018

Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses. Bonne continuation :-)


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