bac notion anglais spaces and exchanges

Sujet du devoir

I’m going to talk about the notion spaces and exchanges.  A space matches with the different countries and societies. The exchanges are the migratory, cultural, economic, linguistic … flow. This notion deals with the immigration to the United States. In order to illustrate this notion I will try to answer the question:

Why the migrant goes to America and not in another country? It’s the best place to immigrate?

To answer the question we will start by talking about why they migrate to United-States. So the United-Sates the USA represents the American dream, it represents the new life, and especially the dream life. Indeed the USA is seen as countries with the living conditions are appreciable as explained by father flood in the text of written understanding Brooklyn because Eilis lives in Ireland and the living conditions are better in America than in Ireland. She can have a better job and a more financially enviable life.  Again with the written understanding Dear Matka we know she left because life was better in the USA than at home. The migrants leave their country still because the living conditions are better elsewhere but also for the school systemas we see in a video where students decide to integrate a very famous school in America and for that they need good results for their baccalaureate. But migrants came in America also for the financial side, the work and the population more pleasant than elsewhere as explained in the documents Brookyn, Dear Matka, with the photo of Ellis Island who we can see the island and New York next to Ellis Island. We can see that in the interview of Stephen Fry says the Americans are very nice and optimistic so this is one of the best countries to immigrate.

After that we are going to see the different problems when you migrate to the United States. Fist the trip is very long by boat and very expensive... lot of migrants don’t enough to make the crossing we see that in the written understanding Brooklyn and Dear Matka because Rose spent a lot of time on the boat before she arrived. Another problem is the fact that America is often a destination that is far from the native country and Eilis’s mother is afraid of the danger of the country as well as of not seeing her daughter again because she will be far and will not return or Rose in Dear Matka who writes a letter to his mother to give her news because she is far away.At the end we can say that in time, the reception conditions for migrants were not all correct: they were separated, passed several inspections and the oral understanding of Ellis Island and the photo of Ellis Island proves these sometimes unpleasant and nasty conditions

To conclude we can say that immigrants come to the United States because the living conditions, the work, the financial conditions are better than in their country. But the United-States are not without problems because the trip is expensive and long. That migrants leave their families permanently or not but they can't go back every time.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

j'ai besoin d'aide pour ma corrcetion de notion avec mon anglais pas trop correct je ne voudrais pas faire trop d'erreur et avce le bac qui approche :(

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