Correction d'un texte (sa prend juste 5 min svp :)

Publié le 9 mai 2011 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 11 mai 2011 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

Coucou jdevais faire un article (émouvant) concernant le mariage de Kate et William pouvez vous me corriger les fautes et si c'est bien?? Merci

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

It is in the Abbey of Westminster where the small son of Queen Elisabeth II, future king of England, took for wife, the commoner, Catherine Middleton.
A moving and crazily romantic ceremony. It is in front of the whole world that they said themselves "yes". Throughout the ceremony we saw a very welded family, a big complicity between two brothers. Brothers who lived the same drama of the loss of their mother, they were particularly moving during this unique. Exchanges and collusive glances, the sons of Lady Di testified of a brotherly love which really rang.
A very moving moment for prince William who has of to share one of the most beautiful days of life, without the presence of her mother.
This marriage has allowed France and the world to forget for a moment all the disasters that happen on the planet: earthquakes and nuclear power plants in Japan; Revolutions in Arab countries; Attacks to Marrakech …
The marriage of Kate and William, a historic event which will remain engraved in the memoirs of all!



5 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 9 mai 2011
the grandson of
ou bien: Elizabeth II's grandson
il faut lire; Elizabeth the second's grandson, William, took for a wife= married(épousa)

that they said' Yes, I will'
we saw a very closely-knit family,
à + tard
Anonyme
Posté le 9 mai 2011
merci hocuspocus
Anonyme
Posté le 9 mai 2011
we saw a very closely_knit family, a deep complicity between the two brothers.Brothers who lived the tragic loss of their mother.They were particul
Anonyme
Posté le 9 mai 2011
they were particularly moving during this unique event.Exchanging knowing glances, Lady Di's sons ' brotherly love really rang true.
( Lady Di's sons' brotherly love= l'amour fraternel des fils de L Di)
A very moving moment for Prince W who had to live one of the most beautiful days of his life without HIS mother.

...........a historic event which will remain etched in all our memories
Anonyme
Posté le 9 mai 2011
Merci beaucoup ! c'est gentil !

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