Débat en anglais.

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, je suis au Cned, et je dois faire un débat sur la liberté en anglais, de 3-4 minutes, c'est oral!! ^^ Je l'ai déjà fait et j'aurais besoin d'une correction, et de savoir aussi si c'est bien.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voici mon travail:

Good morning ladies and gentlemen,

As you probably know, human beings have always fought for their freedoms, and has been for millennial. I think for example to black slaves in America, or women who have fought for more freedom, I think here in George Sand, who fought for the emancipation of women. But even today, in some countries, some human beings are not free. For example, in China or Iran, where political freedom does not exist, in these countries, opponents of the regime have mysteriously disappeared. Then, in North Korea, no religion is tolerated. But in dictatorships, it is women who suffer the most damage to the liberties. I think such women in Afghanistan who do not have the freedom to learn, work, wear what they wish.
So human beings have always fought for their freedoms, I think women who fight for stop wearing the veil that are required to have because of their religions, or people who fought for their freedoms during the Arab Spring… and many died. But, it is true that it is difficult to fight for its freedom, because people who hinder our rights and freedoms are powerful people like kings while the absolute monarchy, or the presidents who “reign” in countries dictatorial today. Try to follow the example of Rosa Parks, who fought for her freedom. For me it is a woman of courage!
For me freedom is a right that everyone should have. The word freedom is in fact present in the French currency. But it is a duty to respect the freedom of others, not they say “freedom ends where others”.
While freedom is a right, but there are certain limits not to exceed, we have no right to hurt anyone. After all, we are human beings, we are all brothers and sisters, so we all have the same rights. I am for freedom for all people that exist on this Earth, regardless of his age, sex, nationality, religion.
So we all fight for our freedom. And I ask you all here present, to respect the freedom of others.

Long live freedom!

Goodbye and thank you all.

Merci d'avance à tous de votre aide, j'aurais donc besoin qu'on me corrige les fautes, et qu'on me dise si la travail est bien...
Merci encore d'avance.