devoir anglais a rendre

Sujet du devoir

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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

I think I choose a poster of the movie "Avatar " for put it sin my time capsule because this movie is the movie the most seen of 2000s and of all the times in the cinema. I chose this movie because I love this movie and for me the future owes know the most popular movie of the 2000s.

I choose too the first i phone representative of 2000s .In my opinions the i phone is the first smartphone and that it is necessary that all generations remembers it is for its that I choose it.

I put in my time capsule a recent smartwatch representative of 2010s. I believe that I chose the smartwatch to show our new technology and because I love the technology of 2000s 2010s.

I choose newspaper with has the headlines the attack of World Trade Center. To my mind that is the attack the most violent of the year 2000s. I choose this object because it shocked many people and you should not forget it is people who died this day.

I choose a Xbox one because is new generations of consoles of the year 2010. I choose it because for me it is the most powerful console and most to improve years 2000s and 2010s.