Essay

Sujet du devoir

je dois rédiger un essaie sur l'impact que peuvent avoir les parents sur le futur travail de leurs enfants, en faite j'aurais plus besoin d'aide pour corriger mes fautes,

Merci d'avance

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Employment is in crisis. It's very difficult to find a job even if we are highly qualified, but we must get one because of the high cost of living. Thus the career advices are very important for teenagers. Worried about economical contexta lot of parents interfere with their children's decisions whether ( ce qui peut) could be dangerous. We could wonder what should induce parents to influence their children in their futur profession ?

-We can see parents are inclined to influence children for many reasons. On parents mind, teenagers aren't enough mature to chose their futur job, so parents are worried about they don't manage in their life or don't make the good choice. In effect, parent's have lived more experience and know better life traps. They could prevent children from the mistakes not to do ( à ne pas faire).
-They want the best for their children, this love make they can't help interfering with the guidance. they are worried for their futur project and hope a bright futur.
-Parents want their children be safe and secure so that their children job is a good way ( moyen) to control their future to ensure (assurer) a calm life.

-Besides this trend (tendency) could at times prove (turn out) dangerous.
-Many parents put pressure on their children and are too demanding trying to impose their will on their children. They could make their children unhappy and spoil childhood of their children.
-Parents overprotective don't accept their children go study far away, they are selfish (egoistic) prefer have their children at their sides rather (instead) make the sudies they love.
Because parents and children don't have the same hobbies, tastes, so parent's could encourage and convince their children to do a job they think good, but that prove (s'avérer) unfulfilling for their children and they could regret the rest of their life.
-Parents tansfere their career project to their childrens.
-parents who have fulfilling and hight qualified job want a lot of time (le plus souvent) their childrens practise the same job.
-Panrents are too demanding and don't respect the capacities of their children, who could be traumatized, it's useless because they west time in their studies.
-It could create tension within the family , because if the children is determined, independant, he wants to live his own life and doesn't want to submit at the decision ( se plier à la décision) of his parents.

To conclude, a lot of parents interfere with the career project of their children for more or less legitimate reason. The choice of the guidance is very important I think parents have a role to play but they don't have to impose their will.

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