grammaire lettre pour demain matin

bsr les fautes de grammaire sont en gras. j'espère t'avoir aidé.

Dear Franck ,

I received yesterday your letter and i must explain you what did happen and why ididn't left with You . (3fautes)

I remember the day i have first met You . I immediately fell in love with You : i was so happy .... I could be me at last And forget my life terrible at home , where i was afraid of the violence of my father... Besides i had to take care of my brothers and sisters and it wasn't easy. (3fautes)

Then you said me that you wanted that we get married and go to Argentina . You hoped find a better job there .... And You asked me to follow you . I didn't know what to do :on the one hand, it was wonderful because it meant freedom and love. But on the onther hand , if i had left Dublin , i would abandon my brothers and sisters . No , i really couldn't do that . Moreover my roots is in Dublin : my life is very hard, but i know i can't to leave . (6 fautes)

I even asked God to help me finding a solution , because i was torn between my love for You and my duty to my family...
When i was at the station with you, i was scared: there was so much people ... I could think only of my family. That's why i run away at the last minute.
I know that i'm always in love with you , but i think we must accept ours fate . I will never forget you. (8 fautes)

Evelyne

I received your letter yesterday and i must explain you what did happen and why i didn't leave with You .
I remember the day i  first met You . I immediately fell in love with You : i was so happy .... I could be me at least And forget my terrible life at home , where i was afraid of my father's violence ... Besides i had to take care of my brothers and sisters and it wasn't easy.
Then you said me that you wanted us to get married and to go to Argentina . You hoped you would find a better job there .... And You asked me to follow you . I didn't know what to do :on the one hand, it was wonderful because it meant freedom and love. But on the onther hand , if i had left Dublin , i would have abandoned my brothers and sisters . No , i really couldn't do that . Moreover my roots are in Dublin : my life is very hard, but i know i can't  leave .
I even asked God to help me finding a solution , because i was torned between my love for You and my duty to my family...
 When i was at the station with you, i was scared: there was so much people ... I could only thinkabout my family. That's why i ran away at the last minute.
I know that i'm still in love with you , but i think we must accept our fate . I will never forget you.
Evelyne

Bon courage