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My name is .... and I am sixteen years old.
I was born in St Cloud, a city from Paris. Today, I live in ..... .
I have one brother and a little sister. I have a dog and a turtle in my garden.
I am cool, friendly, easy going and honest to persons but my biggest flaw is that : I am talkative (bavarde).
I have many hobbies. I am crazy about swimming and music but my favorite hobbie is playing guitar.
One thing I do not like to dance and sing ( Une chose que je n'aime pas c'est chanter et danser) JE NE SAIS PAS COMMENT CA SE DIT ALORS J'AI FAIT MOT A MOT !!)
Last year I was in this school.
This summer I went to Portugal for two and a half months and I was also a week in Madrid
I have no projects defined so I prefer not to say anything but later I would have a big house and a lot money
Sincerely
Moi
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Amicalement veuillez me corrigez
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peut être "a city in Paris" mais pas sure
Ok donc dans ce cas tu devras dire:
I am in the same school as last year and again in second ou now i am in second
Ca depend ce que tu veux dire si tu as redoublé tu dit again in second et si tu viens d'arriver en seconde tu dis now i am in second
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My name is .... and I am sixteen years old.
I was born to St Cloud, a city from Paris. Today, I live in ..... .
I have one brother and a little sister. I have a dog and a turtle in my garden.
I am cool, friendly, easy going and honest to persons but my biggest flaw is that I am talkative (bavarde).
I have many hobbies. I am crazy about swimming and music but my favorite hobbie is playing guitar.
A thing which I don't like it's to sing and to dance.
Last year I was in this school. ???
This summer I went to Portugal for two and a half months and I was also a week in Madrid.
I have no project defined so I prefer say nothing but later I would have a big house and a lot money
Voila juste "a city from Paris" au début du texte je sais pas trop si c'est juste. J'espere t'avoir aidé, peut être y'a t-il encore d'autres erreurs je ne sais pas trop ^^
Merci beaucoup !!
" Last year I was in this school. ??? " Je voulais dire que " l'année dernière j'étais dans le même lycée que cette année et en seconde"
Merci