anglais devoir 1 cned

Publié le 22 sept. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 29 sept. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

vous etes un personnage de la vie ublique qui vient de visiter un lieu ou la situation animalke humaine ecologique vous a choque.Vous en faites part a une assemblee.Vous ne manquerez pas de dire qui vous etes et vous racontez ce que vous avez vu et ce que vous pensez et ressentez et donc pourquoi vous avez choisi de defendre cette causeVous avez decide de monter une association et vous voulez convaincre les gens d adherer

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

ben en fait j aimerais que vous me donniez des idees ou un debut de texte pour apres le finir moi meme
merci d avance



7 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 22 sept. 2011
cce devoir est un devoir oral je peu taider je suis au cned en seconde si tu veux ajoute moi kane-78@hotmail.com
Anonyme
Posté le 22 sept. 2011
Voici un exemple, si cela peut t'aider :


My name is Sandy Smith, the mayor of Greenfield, a small town in Ohio. I am a very active mayor and I am also an animal defender. Among all my duties, my job involves visiting animal shelters to check the living conditions of the animals.
Last week, I visited an animal shelter in Midland, in Ohio and what I saw was indescribable.
The animals were enchained and trapped in cages; many of them were sick and had wounds. So I could tell they were abused. The health and safety conditions were unacceptable. The animals were hungry and scared. After visiting this shelter, I could not help crying. I was angry, sad and upset. But I finally calmed down and thought of what I could do to change this situation. I then decided to start my own Animal rights organization called “For the Animal’s sake”. This organization will aim to protect the rights, welfare and habitats of animals. All the animal shelters that my organization will financially back, will have to meet the legislation in force and all the environmental standards. It is high time that we act for animals and we sue all the shelters that do not meet all the legal requirements. As I have said earlier, the shelter I visited was the worst I have ever seen. Those animals were calling for help. And as a human, a pet owner, I can’t remain helpless and I have to do something for them. This is why I ask you to join my organization. All the donations are welcomed and will help us to achieve our goals: no more illegal shelters!!! Feel free to donate what you can! But your help will be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance for your attention and your help in this matter!
Anonyme
Posté le 22 sept. 2011
My name is Sandy Smith, the mayor of Greenfield, a small town in Ohio. I am a very active mayor and I am also an animal defender. Among all my duties, my job involves visiting animal shelters to check the living conditions of the animals.
Last week, I visited a shelter in Midland, in Ohio and what I saw was indescribable.
The animals were enchained and trapped in cages; many of them were sick and had wounds. So I could tell they were abused. The health and safety conditions were unacceptable. The animals were hungry and scared. After visiting this shelter, I could not help crying. I was angry, sad and upset. But I finally calmed down and thought of what I could do to change this situation. I then decided to start my own Animal rights organization called “For the Animal’s sake”. This organization will aim to protect the rights, welfare and habitats of animals. All the animal shelters that my organization will financially back, will have to meet the legislation in force and all the environmental standards. It is high time that we act for animals and we sue all the shelters that do not meet all the legal requirements. As I have said earlier, the shelter I visited was the worst I have ever seen. Those animals were calling for help. And as a human, a pet owner, I can’t remain helpless and I have to do something for them. This is why I ask you to join my organization. All the donations are welcomed and will help us to achieve our goals: no more illegal shelters!!! Feel free to donate what you can! But your help will be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance for your attention and your help in this matter!
Anonyme
Posté le 23 sept. 2011
bjr je suis au cned seconde alors je pense que l on peut s'aider aussi a bientot

Anonyme
Posté le 23 sept. 2011
merci beaucoup:)
Anonyme
Posté le 24 sept. 2011
fakardis ajoute moi kane-78@hotmail.com
Anonyme
Posté le 24 sept. 2011
gros bitch de Cu !

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