Besoin d'une correction de rédaction.

Publié le 3 janv. 2012 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 10 janv. 2012 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour,
Je dois faire une rédaction en anglais qui consiste à expliquer comment envoyer un eMail avec pièce-jointe. J'aurais besoin de vous pour me corriger.
VOICI LA REDACTION :

For beginning,
you had to go in www.hotmail.com.

If you don't have eMail adress, clic on "Sign Up".
Then you had to enter your Name, date of birthday, your pseudonym, ...
Congratulations, you had create your eMail adress !

Then, enter your login, and clic on "Log-In".
When you was connect, clic on "New Message",
And type the eMail adress of your receiver.
Clic on the paperclip for choose the attachment. Find the file in the folder where you have save this file.
And clic to "Load". Wait a little moment during the loading.
During that, type the subject, and your message.

When you've finish that, clic "SEND", and your message is send.
Close the windows, and clic on the logo of yout computer (Beginning), and clic "Turn Off" !

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Merci à tous ceux qui liront la rédaction jusqu'en bas (: !



5 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2012
TO beginning,
you had to go ON www.hotmail.com.

If you don't have AN eMail adress, clic on "Sign Up".
Then you had to enter your Name, date of BIRTH, your pseudon, ...
Congratulations, you HAVE CREATED your eMail adress !

Then, enter your login, and clic on "Log-In".
When you ARE connect, clic on "New Message",
And type the eMail adress of your receiver.
Clic on the paperclip TO choose the attachment. Find the file in the folder where you have SAVED this file.
And clic to "Load". Wait a little moment during the loading.
During that MOMENT, type the subject, and your message.

When you HAVE finish that, clic "SEND", and your message is send.
Close the windows, and clic on the logo of yout computer (Beginning), THEN clic "Turn Off" !
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2012
First go to www.hotmail.com,

If you don't have any e-mail address, click on "sign-up".
Then enter your name, birthday date, your screenname

Congratulations, your e-mail address has just been created!


Then, enter your login, and click on "Log-In".
When you are connected, click on "New Message",
And type your recipient's e-mail address.
Click on the paperclip to choose the attachment. You will find the file in the folder containing the file you have saved.
And click on "Load". Wait during the loading.
In the meantime, type the subject, and your message.

When finished, click "SEND", and your message is sent.
Close the windows, and click on the logo of your computer ( and click "Turn
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2012
Merci (: !
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2012
Merci (: !
Anonyme
Posté le 3 janv. 2012
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