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Salut les cybers papys ! J'ai une photo a décrire, es ce que vous pouvez me dire si j'ai fait de grosses fautes ? si mes phrases sont correctes? ou si je pourrai m'améliorer? s'il vous plait ? Merci d'avance NINA . NOù j'en suis dans mon devoir
The document is a photo, in color, the colours are striking.As an introduction, in the first paragraph, we describe the picture and in the second, we will say what that means.
First, in a general way, It’s an urban landscape and when we look at this landscape, we see the misery of our environment. In the foreground, we can see waste such as household waste, paper, cardboard or plastic ... Then, In the background we see a lot of seagulls flying over the waste.
After, to explain this photo, the photographer's aim is to show the environmental degradation. He shows us a symbol of nature who responds to injury than the man involved. He describes, the pollution our beaches. Especially as waste are slow to degrade. So, he said : "We Have to ACT!".
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Elle est un peu légère ta description.
The document is a color picture.
At first, we will describe the picture then we will talk about its meaning.
This picture represents an urban landscape.
Pourrais-tu mettre la photo merci afin d'étayer tes dires?
The document is a color picture.
At first, we will describe the picture then we will talk about its meaning.
This picture represents an urban landscape.
Pourrais-tu mettre la photo merci afin d'étayer tes dires?
J'ai refai mon texte avec votre aide et j'ai modifié quelques trucs. Le voici :
The document is a colour photo, the colours are striking.
As an introduction, we will describe the picture then we will talk about its meaning.
First, this picture represents an urban landscape and when we look at this landscape, we see the misery of our environment. In the foreground, we can see waste such as household waste, paper, cardboard or plastic ... Then, in the background we see a lot of seagulls flying over the waste.
After, the photographer's aim is to show the environmental deterioration. He shows us a symbol of nature who responds to injury that man caused. He describes the pollution of our beaches. Especially as waste is slow to degrade. I think that, he said: We Have to ACT!
Y'a t-il beaucoup de fotes ? Et comment on fait pour mettre une pièce jointe sur ce site ?
The document is a colour photo, the colours are striking.
As an introduction, we will describe the picture then we will talk about its meaning.
First, this picture represents an urban landscape and when we look at this landscape, we see the misery of our environment. In the foreground, we can see waste such as household waste, paper, cardboard or plastic ... Then, in the background we see a lot of seagulls flying over the waste.
After, the photographer's aim is to show the environmental deterioration. He shows us a symbol of nature who responds to injury that man caused. He describes the pollution of our beaches. Especially as waste is slow to degrade. I think that, he said: We Have to ACT!
Y'a t-il beaucoup de fotes ? Et comment on fait pour mettre une pièce jointe sur ce site ?
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