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Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle for their honey moon. They are in their bathroom.
“My Dear, can you get my bag please‘‘she asked.
During Peter was finding the Kathy bag, she went to the Kitchen to take a knife and she went back to the bathroom.
“I have found it! ‘‘He shouted .Peter was brushing his teeth. When he finished, he drank water and suddenly he fell because of poison which Kathy put in our glass.
Few hours later, Peter was tied up in the room. Kathy was waiting Peter wake up, next she yelled that Peter give the code of his safe but he refused because there was all money inside. Kathy put in an enormous angry and she threaten him with the knife. Peter didn’t understand anything’s because he loved Kathy and she had many gift, jewelry or clothes… but she had not always the famous code. Kathy went in Kitchen to drank, it was 11 pm and during this time, peter who was our phone in front of him, he told the police and wait that arrive.
“Give me this code‘‘she shriek and peter kept the silence…
The police arrived in one hours later and Kathy was stop and driven in prison for assassination attempt and attempt to poison.
THE END
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Kathy and Peter were sleeping in a Castle for their honey moon. They are in their bathroom.
“My Dear, can you get my bag please‘‘she asked.
WHILE Peter was finding the Kathy bag, she went to the Kitchen to take a knife and CAME BACK back to the bathroom.
“I have found it! ‘‘He shouted .Peter was brushing his teeth. When he finished, he drank water and suddenly he fell because of poison which Kathy put in HIS glass.
Few hours later, Peter was tied up in the room. Kathy was waiting FOR Peter TOwake up, next she yelled AT HIM TO give HERthe code of his safe but he refused because there was all THE money inside. Kathy LOST HER TEMPER AND THREATENED him with the knife. Peter didn’t understand anything because he loved Kathy and she had many giftS, jewelry or clothes… but sheDID NOT GET YET THE famous code. Kathy went TO THE Kitchen to drank, it was 11 pm and during this time, peter who was SAW THE phone in front of him, CALLED the police and STARTED TOwait FOR THEM arrive.
“Give me this code‘‘she shriek BUT peter kept HIS silence…
The police arrived in one hour later and Kathy was stopED and driven in prison for assassination attempt and attempt to poison.
THE END