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Voiçi mon énoncé : Faire un petit carnet de voyage qui pourrait être donné sur Nice et sa Région. J'ai fais un beau cahier relié et tous sa et j'ai fais le travail seulement je ne suis pas sur que mon anglais soit parfait tant au niveau de la syntaxe qu'au niveau grammaticale c'est pourquoi je vous demande de me corriger si vous trouvez des fautes. Je vous en remercis pas avance ;)
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The Friday 25th April 2014, I was very happy because with my family ( my parents and my sister ) we traveled in Nice per four days. We took the aeroplane at 15:00 p.m., the route lasted 2 hours, during route I read a book and played on my computer. My name's book was Oliver Twist, I'm surprised because the airport was very large. So after we went into the hotel, his name is the Negresco and is very luxurious, we could see a lot of big rooms, and the waiters had original clothes red and blue with golden buttons. We arrived in our bedroom, I was crazy about her, it was very light and relaxing.After the arrival at the hotel we went into a restaurant at the seafront, the dinner was very tasty and copious. I ate a "Socca", it's a speciality culinary starting with flour of peas. This plate date of the Middle Ages and cooks with fire. And I took three "Montecao", it's a dessert, shortbread cookies with a Cinnamon flavour. After this enjoyable day we are very tired, so we back in our bedroom, watched TV during 15 minutes and slept at 22:00 for 10 hours
After a good night, we took the breakfast in the hotel. We ate croissants and apple juice. In France the croissants are excellent ! The morning we swim in a sea but the water was very cold because we were in April. After swimming we had walked a lot on the "Promenade des Anglais" and we go in "Le petit niçois". It's a restaurant where we can eat French speciality .
I took a "hachis Parmentier" it's very flavourful. The flat is simple it's mashed potato with black meat. I didn't take dessert because I had not much hunger. In the afternoon we went in home's Nicolas. He is my French penfriend he had a very big garden, we got a tan and swam in his swimming pool. I had picked two or three flowers typical of Nice in reminder. My sister and I had slept at home's Nicolas and my parents returned in hotel. The evening we did a barbecue and played guitar.
We were the 27th April and we were up at 10:00. My sister and Iinvited Nicolas and his family at eat with us to visit the "Vieux Nice". We had a lot walk and buy an ice at strawberry and chocolate, it was my first ice of summer and was very fresh ! After we went into the centre city with bicycle , we went in Zara, Game, Micromania and la Fnac. I was impressed because there was a lot of people, but I'm disappointed because there was a lot of pickpocket ! Fortunately the policeman watched the city. I had bought 3 jeans, 2 tee shirts and lot of memory. It was already 13:00 so we had eaten in Mc Donald, we ate fast because we wanted to make the most of Nice. After the meal me and my sister returned in the Negresco and Nicolas and his family back to home. We used the sauna and did a little aboutbodybuilding. After we went in Aquasplash because there is not this water park in London. It was amusing and funny because my sister had fear because some attractions was impressive. We buy a photoand a key ring from us, after the park we go into a Chinese restaurant with our parents, I didn't know this cooking, I take a spicy rice with a caramel pork, I crazy about this cooking. After us back in the hotel to sleep
This day, I was upset because it's our last day. We took the aeroplane at 11:00 for 2 hours. I finished Oliver Twist and ate a little meal : a lettuce and a cookie. We look fotos with a big nostalgia, and we are content with this travel because it was fantastic ! I said "I would like to return to France next year because is a fantastic country ! Two day after the travel it was the resumption of the school but I was very happy because I saw again my friends
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Friday 25th April 2014, I was very happy because I was with my family ( my parents and my sister and I ) we traveled to Nice for four days. We took the airplane at 15:00 p.m., the route lasted 2 hours, during the trip I read a book and played on my computer. The title of the book was Oliver Twist, I was very surprised because the airport was very big. So after we went into the hotel, the name of the hotel is "the Negresco" and it's a very luxurious hotel. There are a lot of big rooms, and all the waiters had original clothes (red and blue with golden buttons). We arrived in our bedroom, I went crazy and happy when I saw it, it was very spacious and relaxing.After our arrival to the hotel, we went into a restaurant (the restaurant was in front of the sea), the dinner was very tasty and copious. I ate a "Socca", it's a speciality culinary composed of flour of peas. This dish date of the Middle Ages and is cooked on fire. And I took three "Montecao", (it's a dessert, shortbread cookies with a Cinnamon flavour). After this enjoyable day we were very tired , so we went back to our bedroom, watched TV during 15 minutes and slept at 22:00 for 10 hours.
After a good night, we took the breakfast in the hotel. We ate croissants and drunk apple juice. In France the croissants are excellent ! In the morning we swam in the sea but the water was very cold because it was April. After swimming we had walked into a famous road called "Promenade des Anglais" and we went into "Le petit niçois". It's a restaurant where we can eat French specialities .
I took a "hachis Parmentier" it's very delicious and tasty. The dish is very simple it's composed of mashed potato with meat. I didn't take dessert because I wasn't hungry anymore. In the afternoon we went to Nicola's house. He is my French penfriend ,he has a very big garden, we got tan and swam in his swimming pool. I picked two or three typical flowers of his garden in 'souvenir'. My sister and I slept in Nicola's house and my parents returned back to the hotel. On the evening we had a barbecue party and played guitar.
We were the 27th of April and we were up at 10:00 am. My sister and I invited Nicolas and his family to eat and also visit the "Vieux Nice" with us. We had a lot of walk, I bought an ice with strawberry and chocolate! After that we all went the city center, we went shopping to" Zara", "Game", "Micromania" and "La Fnac". I was impressed because there was a lot of people over there, but also disappointed to learn that there was a lot of pickpocket! I was happy to see that there was security and police to watch people of "shoplift" . I bought 3 jeans, 2 tee shirts and lot of memories. It was already 1:00pm so we ate in Mc Donald, we ate very quickly because we wanted to visit the most important places in Nice. After the meal my sister and I returned back to the Negresco hotel and Nicolas with his family to their house. We went the SPA and did some bodybuilding. After we went to "Aquasplash" because there is not any of this water park in London. It was very exciting and funny because my sister was scared because of some big attractions that was impressive. We bought a photo of us and also a key necklace, after the park we went into a Chinese restaurant with our parents, by going into this restaurant,I discovered chineese food and many specialities, I took a dish composed of some spicy rice with a caramel pork,it was very tasty,I have no words for this delicious dish. After that, we went back to the hotel to sleep.
And finally our last day...I was very upset. We took the airplane at 11:00am for 2 hours. I finished my book about Oliver Twist and ate a little meal : a salad and a cookie. We look photos, and we were very happy to travel and spend some time together because it was amazing!I told my parents,"I'd like to return to France next year because it's a fantastic country!". Two day after our travel, School , I was very happy because I could see my friends again.
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Friday 25th April 2014, I was very happy because my family ( my parents and my sister ) and I, traveled in Nice for four days. We took the aeroplane at 15:00 p.m., the route lasted 2 hours, during the way to (ici tu met l’endroit ou tu vas) I red a book and played on my computer. The name of my book was Oliver Twist. I was surprised by the fact that the airport was so large. We went to a hotel named the Negresco. It is a very luxurious place, we could see a lot of big rooms, and the waiters had original clothes: red and blue with golden buttons. We went to our bedroom, I was crazy about it, it was very light and relaxing. After the arrival at the hotel we went into a restaurant at the seafront, the dinner was very tasty and copious. I ate a "Socca", it's a speciality culinary starting with flour of peas. This plate date of the Middle Ages and it is cooked with fire. I also took three "Montecao", it's a dessert, shortbread cookies with a Cinnamon flavour. After this enjoyable day we were very tired, so we went back in our bedroom, watched TV for apromaxibly (va voir comment sa s’écrit sur internet) 15 minutes and slept at 22:00 for 10 hours.
J'ai corrigé en couleur, mais sa c'est remis en noir :/ dsl relis bien ton texte. Je continue avec le reste plus tard si sa te dérange pas, je dois moi meme faire français. :)