Corriger mes erreurs

Publié le 14 déc. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 18 déc. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjours je voudrais savoir si vous pouvez me corriger mes erreurs svp :)
Sur le texte j'ai parlé de l'utilisation de l'internet en toute sécurité.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Internet search engines is good but for dangerous, but internet is an integral part of our lives. Five trick to best use the Internet safely:
1. For safety put such complicated passwords with uppercase lower case with numbers.
2. Use antivirus software to protect your computer and personal information. It is necessary to protect your business computer with antivirus software that includes automatic updates.
3. Do not put your confidential information on social media. Web site as Facebook and Twitter offer great opportunities for fraudsters to obtain information on individuals. I opt for a private profile so with minimal personal information.
4. Do not respond to emails that ask for personal information. whether for an update of the information appearing on your account, a check to your account, or even if you have won a contest to be careful not to give your name and address your contact details
5. Download. Even if it's illegal to download Almost 80% of those are illegal downloads but be aware that when you download music movies games or other they may contain viruses and can be serious.

Be careful it has 5 points and you can use your internet safely.



4 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 15 déc. 2011
OK je regarde et te corrige l'ensemble.
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Anonyme
Posté le 15 déc. 2011
oké merci j'attends ta réponse pour ce soir. :)
Anonyme
Posté le 15 déc. 2011
Internet search engines can be a good thing but also dangerous. Internet plays a key role in our everyday’s life. Listed below are five important safety tips to help you to use internet every day.
1. For safety purpose, please create random passwords that are highly secure and extremely difficult to crack due to a combination of lower and uppercase letters and numbers.
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2. Use antivirus software to protect your computer and personal information from harm and against viruses, worms... Purchase antivirus software with automatic updates for your business computer to prevent any virus attacks.
3. Do not put your confidential information on social media networks. Web sites such as Facebook and Twitter offer great opportunities for fraudsters to obtain information on individuals. I would opt for a private profile with minimal personal information.
4. Do not respond to emails requesting for personal information for an update of the details of your account, a check to your account. Even if you won a contest please be careful and do not give your contact details.
5. When downloading music or movie files, games, please make sure that they do not contain any virus that can badly harm your computer. As a reminder: most downloads are illegal and can be severely punished.

Follow carefully those five above tips if you want to surf safely on internet.
Anonyme
Posté le 16 déc. 2011
Je te remercie.

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