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voila mon texte aidez moi en corrigeant mes fautesOnce uponce a day in the city for the twientieth siecle a little boy called the little red riding hood go out to buy junk food(macdo) for this grand-mother,who lives in the 50 streer manchester.After this he go to the grand mother’s house and he meelt the unknown.He talk to the unknown and he run to the little red ridind hod mother’s ans he killed the grand-ma.the boy come and he said: “I have a macdo”.
“good my children”said the unknon,”come on”.
“ok” said,he’s walking for the bed “you are a boy!”cried the boy”where is my grand -ma?”asked the little red.
“I have killed her grand-ma and now I killed you.”
The little red riding holl run and scream”help,help;help,they have killed my grand-ma!”
A policeman come and help the boy.he killed the unknown and the little red riding hood grand-mother’s revit.
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once upon a time in a XXth century city, a little boy called Littlr Red Riding Hood went out to buy junk food for his grandmother who lived at 50 King's Street in Manchester.Then on the way to his grandmother's house and he met a stranger.He talked to the stranger who ran to hios grandmother's place.He killed her. When the boy arrived he said:'I ha
' I have a burger'.
'Good, my child.Come over here.'
'OK', he said and he made for the bed.
'You're a man', cried the boy 'Where's my granny?'.
'Good, my child.Come over here.'
'OK', he said and he made for the bed.
'You're a man', cried the boy 'Where's my granny?'.
correction:
then on the way to his grandmother's house he met a stranger
then on the way to his grandmother's house he met a stranger
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