Créer un dialogue

Sujet du devoir

Salut,je vous explique ma situation pour jeudi je dois passer à l'oral (aïe aïe aïe ) en anglais en faisant un dialogue et j'aurai bien aimé que quelques personnes jettent un œil à mon travail voici ma consigne et mon travail:

Faire un dialogue entre deux amis,l'un veut immigrer pour une raison particulière et l'autre va soit être d'accord soit non en utilisant le Present perfect simple ET be+ing avec for et since;Faire un bilan de la situation,pourquoi le personnage décide t-il de partir ? Donner des conseils,exprimer la conséquence,Expression de l'accord et du désaccord et exprimer son intention et sa détermination.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

O:I wanted to stay here but since my countless failures for find work as you know, I was thinking it is time for me to go away ….I’m going to immigrate England my dear friend … I have searched of work during 2 years this situation was exhausting for me. I’m so tired ..

M: I am absolutely not agree! You have thought your parents? Your sister? I don’t think so !

O: I think a lot of them if you knew …I have decided to hide in the next ship to England. I’m looking forward start a new life, I hope, I could do it.

M: This is crazy! You can not do that, How about if it was your sister who did it? This really a bad plan I advise you not to try It so dangerous!

O: The consequences I do not believe it, you're too pessimistic

M: We must! therefore it is possible that life is still difficult

O: I know but I want to try! I am determined!

M: I have doing everything I could to warn you, Now it is your risk and peril

O: Thank you for all anyway

M: You are my friend It is my job