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Bonjour voilà mon devoirs :Expression semi-guidée :
Vous êtes un personage de la vie publique ( politicien, acteur, chanteur artiste etc…) qui vient de visiter un lieu où la situation humaine, animale écologique vous a choqué(e). Vous en faites part à une assemblée. Vous ne manquerez pas de dire qui vous êtes et vous raconterez ce que vous avez vu et ce que vous pensez et ressentez et donc pourquoi vous avez choisi de defendre cette cause. Vous prenez partie, parlez de vos convictions et évoquez des solutions et aussi de petites choses que chacun peut faire. Vous avez decidé de monter une association et vous voulez convaicre les gens d’adhérer.
Dans votre production on s’attend à du vocabulaire ou à des tournures exprimant:
- L’opinion personnelle ,
- La modalité ,
- La quantité (chiffres) ,
- Votre volonté d’agir.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voilà ce que j'ai fait:Hello world!
My name is Selena Gomez and I am a singer. I was in Somalia last week and I saw what was happening over there with my own eyes. It's amazing! We here we live well while they are victims of famine and drought! I wish I could help them make their lives better. And I want to create an association to help them. That's what I would do in a first part I would give a quarter of the money I receive to my concerts which would dollard about two miles. Secondly I will sell the pull or will be the slogan of the association "One for all and all for one! ". It amazes me when I see that everyone has nothing to do with their situation!
J'aimerais bien que vous me corrigez mes erreurs ou que vous me donniez de nouvelles idées car je ne sais pas si c'est bien :/
Mercii d'avance =)
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J'ai déja fait ce devoir et il te faut beaucoup plus de ligne et "amazing" reviens plus à dire "énorme" ou étonnant donc moi j'aurais dis awful ou "terrible" .Dollard n'est pas un verbe tu dois mettre "cost" et miles et une une unité de longueur . I was shoked when I saw that everybody couldn't do anything to improve their situation.
Mercii pour ton aide =) Si tu veut de l'aide pour des devoirs je te laisse mon adresse mail : ladymina1@hotmail.fr
Tu devrais expliquer mieux en quoi tu veux leur venir en aide et en quoi consisterais ton association et tu est censé convaincre des personnes de t'aider en faisant des dons.
Y a pas de quoi:)
amazing n'est pas vraiment le mot à employer! It's a tragedy!
Hello everybody!
My name is Selena Gomez and I am a famous pop singer in the USA. Last week, I went to Somalia. As you may know, Somalia has been hit by a famine. Many young children are starving to death. Mothers cannot breastfeed their infants anymore because they do not have enough milk. Families are malnourished. Many people are dying as a result of hunger or diseases such as cholera and typhoid.
Upon my arrival in America, I could not help thinking of those people. What could I do for them? How can I urge the world to act for Somalia?
I decided to create my own charity organization: United for Somalia.
I have also made the decision to finance my organization with a part of my royalties. Therefore a quarter of my royalties will be dedicated to the financing of my organization
But I also need your help to finance my organization. Any donation in any amount is welcome.
I will sell a T-Shirt that will promote my organization. The slogan will be "One for all and all for one"!
We must act before it is too late. As Obama says "You can do it"! So we can do it together, we can stop this famine and make our world a better place.
I thank you in advance for your help in this matter and wish you all the best.
Selena Gomez
Voilà dis moi ce que tu en penses.
Hello everybody!
My name is Selena Gomez and I am a famous pop singer in the USA. Last week, I went to Somalia. As you may know, Somalia has been hit by a famine. Many young children are starving to death. Mothers cannot breastfeed their infants anymore because they do not have enough milk. Families are malnourished. Many people are dying as a result of hunger or diseases such as cholera and typhoid.
Upon my arrival in America, I could not help thinking of those people. What could I do for them? How can I urge the world to act for Somalia?
I decided to create my own charity organization: United for Somalia.
I have also made the decision to finance my organization with a part of my royalties. Therefore a quarter of my royalties will be dedicated to the financing of my organization
But I also need your help to finance my organization. Any donation in any amount is welcome.
I will sell a T-Shirt that will promote my organization. The slogan will be "One for all and all for one"!
We must act before it is too late. As Obama says "You can do it"! So we can do it together, we can stop this famine and make our world a better place.
I thank you in advance for your help in this matter and wish you all the best.
Selena Gomez
Voilà dis moi ce que tu en penses.
Ok merci de ton aide =)
Merciiiiiii beaucoup pour ton aide Miren75!! Je trouve que c'est une très bonne rédaction ! Mercii encore =D
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