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Bonjour j'aurais vraiment besoin d'aider, je dois faire ceci:
Your role: You are a chronicler on aweekly radio show.
Your task: You must present a chronicle to defend the rights of an indigenous people. Your talk must last 3 minutes.
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J'ai déjà écrit ça mais je sais pas quoi mettre d'autre et je pense avoir fait des fautes de grammaire:
Good Morning! Today I ‘m talking to you about aborigines.
Australia colonized by the British from 1770. They felt that the country was uninhabited, so they sent their prisoners. European thought Aborigines were people below the white man.
However Aborigines weren’t inferior, they had a different lifestyle. People are very attached to nature. They were hunters and gatherers. They lived in harmony with nature. According to their traditions, giant creatures came out of the earth, sea and sky to create the life and landscapes.
Aborigines have always considered the British as invaders. They have always defended against them and refused to sign peace treaties.
Aborigine’s children were taken from their families and were taken in British family where they placed in the Home Most families and where they found out to be good British.
They forbade the natives to have children together. Mestizo were to marry whites. After several generations, the English thought they could eradicate all Aborigines. The British wanted eradicate Aborigines.
Since 1930 there are civil rights for Aborigines. Douglas Nicholls advanced law for Aborigines.
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bonjour,
Voici ce que j'ai mis perso, si cela peut t'aider à compléter ta copie :
Canada is facing a crisis with regard to the situation of indigenous peoples because of the removal of their rights which they still suffer the consequences.
There are three groups of aboriginal peoples in Canada :
the First Nations, Metis and Inuit.
I visited the Canadian soil, including Ottawa, for several days, and my findings are alarming.
Canada has not reduced the social disparities between Aboriginal people and other Canadians in recent years. According to him, the disputes about the territory and natural resources continue to fuel the tensions and the sense of distrust.
The racism toward the native people still exists and is manifested especially in the search of a dwelling or a job.
Approximately a quarter are familiar enough a native language to support a conversation. This proportion appears to be declining.
The Aboriginal people who are looking for housing are often discriminated against on the basis of race.
When one has a housing crisis, this discrimination and this racism is increasing. A suicide rate five times higher than among young Canadians who are not of aboriginal descent, and for women, a risk eight times higher to be murdered.
The cause of this state of affairs is the overcrowding in housing in poor condition in the reserves of the country, the other half of the aboriginal population live in urban areas.
The reserve land is of lower quality and are too small to support an economy. If Canadian governments have indeed acted during the last few years to improve the living conditions of aboriginal people, it proves insufficient.
Despite the wealth and prosperity of Canada, Aboriginal peoples are living in deplorable conditions, including the problems of today are derived from those of the past.
The young people of the communities are struggling to study at home, and those who have university graduates in the major cities do not return to their reserve, because they are not going to be able to own their own residence or even have the right to a healthy home, knowing that there is almost no employment.
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