Devoir sur ses projet futurs

Pour quelqu'un intéressé par le métier de journalisme ou autre, qui ne savait pas quoi faire avant

(applicable à d'autres contextes bien sûr!)

"When I was young, when I was just a child, I wanna be vet, like my father. He were a model for me, because I always be impressed by him ! But, with the time, I have beginning to discover others ideas of jobs, without have chosen particular way.

When I entered in high school, I was worry and terrified, 'cause I don't had any idea of what I wanna be, and I wanna do ! It was very stressful for me, because of my friends, who all have ideas of their future jobs ! 

Finally, with the time, I begin to interest me at the job of journalist. This idea comes to be with event which disturb me. There was an attack on people who worked for the liberty of expression, and they were journalists ! This event gives me the taste (?) of this job, and I know, now, that I wanna change the mentality of others people, and that I wanna beat me so that the world has the right to express itself, for ever."

évidemment c'est un peu dramatique et héroïque, mais il faut toujours "broder" pour que le prof croit que t'aies une vie de fou et tout, ça rend toujours mieux

Il faut que tu développes de ce côté-là je pense.

Bref voilà, ça doit être blindé de fautes de grammaire, de temps et de conjugaison, mais c'est le fond qui compte ici !

Bonne soirée