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Publié le 3 févr. 2012 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 10 févr. 2012 dans 12A
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bonjour,
Je dois transformer ce texte tel que ce soit comme si c'était moi qui faisait ce discours mais je ne sais pas quoi changer.Merci d'avance pour votre aide

Teachers,friends and follow classmates,i stand before you today to promote myself as a potential candidate for class president
Do you feel that your needs opinions and ideas go unnoticed?would you like to make changes around the school?Cheaper prices in the cafeteria?longer breaks between classes?less homework?well i am just th personn to voice these ideas and to get them moving.Your vote will bring the changes you want to this school.
But you may be asking,why vote for me?i a a highly reliable and responsible personn.Working as a referee forces you to make important decisions and apply the rules equally to everyone.You can count on me to carry out your plans.A vote for me is a vote for your future

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Teachers,friends and follow classmates,i stand before you today to promote myself as a potential candidate for class president
Do you feel that your needs opinions and ideas go unnoticed?would you like to make changes around the school?Cheaper prices in the cafeteria?longer breaks between classes?less homework?well i am just th personn to voice these ideas and to get them moving.Your vote will bring the changes you want to this school.
But you may be asking,why vote for me?i a a highly reliable and responsible personn.Working as a referee forces you to make important decisions and apply the rules equally to everyone.You can count on me to carry out your plans.A vote for me is a vote for your future



3 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 3 févr. 2012
Teachers,friends and fellow classmates,i stand before you today to promote myself as a potential candidate for class president
Do you feel that your needs, opinions and ideas go unnoticed?would you like to make changes around the school?Cheaper prices in the cafeteria?longer breaks between classes?less homework?well i am just the person to voice these ideas and to get them moving.Your vote will bring the changes you want to this school.
But you may be asking,why vote for me?
I am a highly reliable and responsible personn.Working as a referee forces you to make important decisions and apply the rules equally to everyone.You can count on me to carry out your plans.A vote for me is a vote for your future
Anonyme
Posté le 3 févr. 2012
j'ai juste corrigé les fautes d'orthographe.

Mais évidemment ce texte ne convient pas si tu n'es pas 'arbitre'.
Tu dois parler de toi , de tes compétences, de tes valeurs...
Anonyme
Posté le 3 févr. 2012
non je pense dire que je suis timide mais que je suis prete à defendre mes camarades devant mes camarades et les representer

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