Publié le 19 sept. 2010 il y a 4A
- Fin › 21 sept. 2010 dans 4A
Sujet du devoir
Bonjour, est ce que vous pouvez me corriger mon expression ecrite car j'ai peur qu'il y ait pas mal de fautes d'orhographes, c'est pourquoi j'aimerais solliciter votre aide.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
I was ashamed and i feel like humilious. I say a way embarrassing :" I am not a work addict, a worh aholic, i just like my job and enjoy what i do, i am passioned by it, can you understand that!?"
At this moment, i can see Paige's face a bit angry, and tense.
She replied: " There is a difference between to like her job and be completly addict to it ... You can't spend more than three minutes without thinking to it emily! The proof, when you entered, the first thing that you asked it was if there is some computers to send email to your custumers whereas you are here to relax you, it's an local to it, because massage are really beneficit...
When she finished her reproach, i can't retain my tear, because she was completly right, in spite of all( je voulais dire malgrès tout)
When she saw i was crying , i feel her confused and she immediatly approach to me. "What happen Emily, i didn't want you to cry. Awww, am sorry"
- It 's not your fault Paige, you are right , i have a big problem with my job, since i lost my husband in an accindent's car. I was with him this night, we had to go in a friend's house to a meal, and a man who have too drink , "fonça" on us and he killed my husband! I saw him lose the life ,i heard his last breathing, without do something, it was too later.... i Have only him in my life it was all to me, i go out with him in another country cause my parents didn't accept him anymore, no body in my family didn't want to acept him, because he was not too good for me according to them... Since i lost him, i refugied me in my work, to try to forget, it's my therapy for the shock terrible that i undergo: I say me that helping some victim in making case for them it's a way to render justice,( parce que'lle est avocate)to some victim who knew what i am living
I see PAige's face sad, "melancolique" : "I understand all now Emily, but henceforth, i will help you to take back taste in the life, try to forget, not forget , but have time for you, and pass less time in your work, and help you in your therapie
Thankss Paige, i promess you that i will try to follow your advice.