Inventer une histoire policière (environ 20ligne) en anglais

Inventer une histoire policière (environ 20ligne) en anglais

Publié le 18 févr. 2012 il y a 2A par Iwanttobeperfect - Fin › 25 févr. 2012 dans 2A
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Sujet du devoir

Inventer une histoire policière originale en utilisant correctement le prétérit simple et prétérit B+ing

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Brenda Craft had everything to be happy: she was beautiful, young, rich and to work trés indeed on the school. She had the best friend of the world, Jhon and the better two brilliant friend: Maya and Emily, and a coast of unlimited popularity. During January she recut anonymous threats which disturbed his tranquillity. Brenda escaped from few in a car accident: she was saved by Chuck, a mysterious boy who disappears before she was able to thank him. The next day when she had wanted to thank him, he had answered nothing and left without turning around. The rumour says that he would have killed his ex-girlfriend. Brenda was reported missing 3 days after. Brenda escaped from few in a car accident: she was saved by Chuck, a mysterious boy who disappears before she was able to thank him. The next day when she had wanted to thank him , he had answered nothing and left without turning around. The rumour says that he would have killed his ex-girlfriend. Brenda was reported missing 3 days aprés. Emily when to her voullait also to discover who had to kill her best friend, while she walked in the corridor of the lycé she heard Lindsey and Jhon quarrel.. She entered her room and found Brenda's personal diary which dated for one year, she found quite her quarrels, her courtship, her enjoyments and her punishments there, and full of photo of three girls or Brenda carried the necklace which had offered him Jhon and felt that the dormitory of three girls felt a smell of dried blood. The next day, Emily went to give the personal diary of Brenda to David. This last one studied him but found no indication. Jhon arrived and seemed to préocuper.
He asserted that the writing of warning letters seemed to him familiar. Emily also jetta a look and fetched a jacket in its room.Then she lives Maya tennant the necklace which Brenda carried all the time, and she understood. She rappellait of or vennait this writing, and the smell of the blood everything was clear has present. She pushed a crit, the enquéteur, Jhon and pupils arrived and Emily their explica that Maya was the culprit, then David found in the cupboard of Maya Brenda's body. Before going into the police car, addressing Emily and Jhon she taught them why she had killed him : " she had everything and I had nothing. I wanted to take revenge for his happiness which I was never able to have has cause of her. "


8 commentaires pour ce devoir


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MisterT95
MisterT95
Posté le 18 févr. 2012
Le prétérit simple sert à : parler d'une action brève passée. Le prétérit BE+BV-ing sert à : parler d'une action passée qui a duré dans le temps.

Mets directement les mots sur lesquels tu bloques pour qu'on t'aide.
Ginnyy
Ginnyy
Posté le 20 févr. 2012
Brenda Craft had everything to be happy: she was beautiful, young, rich and to work TRES???? indeed on the school.
Dès le début, on sent un la traduction par internet, je pense que le mieux ce serait que tu postes aussi la version fraçaise pour qu'on puisse se retrouver et voir si ce que tu voulais dire et bien formuler.
Ginnyy
Ginnyy
Posté le 20 févr. 2012
Brenda Craft had everything to be happy: she was beautiful, young, rich and to work TRES???? indeed on the school.
Dès le début, on sent un la traduction par internet, je pense que le mieux ce serait que tu postes aussi la version fraçaise pour qu'on puisse se retrouver et voir si ce que tu voulais dire et bien formuler.
Iwanttobeperfect
Iwanttobeperfect
Posté le 20 févr. 2012
"Brenda Craft eut tout pour être heureuse : elle était belle, jeune, riche et travailler trés bien à l'école. Elle avait le petit copain le plus craquant du monde,Jhon et deux meilleures amie géniale : Maya et Emily, et une côte de popularité illimitée. "
sa c'est le début :/
Iwanttobeperfect
Iwanttobeperfect
Posté le 20 févr. 2012
"Brenda Craft eut tout pour être heureuse : elle était belle, jeune, riche et travailler trés bien à l'école. Elle avait le petit copain le plus craquant du monde,Jhon et deux meilleures amie géniale : Maya et Emily, et une côte de popularité illimitée. "
sa c'est le début :/
Iwanttobeperfect
Iwanttobeperfect
Posté le 20 févr. 2012
En faite je sais pas du tout j'ai juste fait du ré verso.. --" Je suis vraiment nulle en anglais et je ne sais pas comment employer les temps :/ donc pour moi je ne sais pas si au moins 1 verbe est juste..
Ginnyy
Ginnyy
Posté le 21 févr. 2012
Brenda Craft had everything she needed to be happy; she was beautiful, young, rich, popular and smart. She had the perfect boyfriend, the cutest boy in the world, John; and two wonderful best friends: Maya and Emily.
Everything was perfect, until January; when she received anonymous threats.
MisterT95
MisterT95
Posté le 21 févr. 2012
Pour les verbes, dis lesquels tu utilises pour qu'on t'aide(par ex : irréguliers ou pas), et dit si tu as des expressions dont tu n'es pas sûre.

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