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un murder was to day a rain in secondary school. fifteen people dead but one person survivor named Zoé. She had a burn in the thigh. The inspector began in investigate. Zoé admited in hospital did question by the inspector:"-Hello! How are you? inspector asked kindly.
-Her can go better? Zoé asked
-I can you ask some question?
-Yes, of course
-thank you, first, how old are you?
-fifteen years old, Zoé answed
-What's your name?
-my name is Zoé
-what's were your link with the people fatality
-was my class, some we had the time of ran away, told Zoé
-Do you had recognize the murdered?
-Vaguely, he weared one balaclava, he was big.
-i had found throw flame.Why according to we griped a firearm, we test for hoped discover the fingerprints but who was give your teacher?
-she was ran away with others pupil
-Thank you, much for your help precious
-i wanted you help
-goodbye
A police station, the test were came, the inspector looked a fingerprint found. he looked in the criminal record.
he looked so the person correponded and one person corresponded. Was a man named Etan, he worked in high school as sweeper, he questioned, he said he had become crazy and he was tired of this work, he had an impulse.
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"-Hello! How are you? inspector asked kindly.
-Her can go better? Zoé asked (pk elle demande : elle peut aller mieux ? pk une question ?)
-I can you ask some question? (ATTENTION : n'oublie pas la structure d'une question avec can : Auxiliaire+sujet+base verbale+complément)
-Yes, of course
-thank you, first, how old are you?
-fifteen years old, Zoé ANSEWERED
-What's your name?
-my name is Zoé (tu devrais inverser avec la question sur l'age ;))
-what's were your link with the people fatality
-was my class, some we had the time of ran away, told Zoé ( je ne comprends pas le sens des 2 phrases..)
-Do you had recognize the murdered ?(là tu as mis la personne tué, je crois que tu voulais mettre le tueur : murderer)
-Vaguely(je ne sais pas si ça se dit), he weared one balaclava, he was big.(????)
-i had found throw flame.Why according to we griped a firearm, we test for hoped discover the fingerprints but who was give your teacher? ?????
-she was ran away with others pupil ?????
-Thank you SO much for your PRECIOUS HELP (en français on dit précieuse aide, en anglais on inverse adj et nom
-i wanted you help ???
-goodbye
A police station, the test were came, the inspector looked a fingerprint found. he looked in the criminal record.
he looked so the person correponded and one person corresponded. Was a man named Etan, he worked in high school as sweeper, he questioned, he said he had become crazy and he was tired of this work, he had an impulse ?????
La plupart du temps je ne comprends pas ce que tu as voulu mettre donc j'ai mis ???? . dis moi pour que je t'aide plus ;) et fait bien attention à l'utilisation de tes temps !
Biz
-Her can go better? Zoé asked (pk elle demande : elle peut aller mieux ? pk une question ?)
-I can you ask some question? (ATTENTION : n'oublie pas la structure d'une question avec can : Auxiliaire+sujet+base verbale+complément)
-Yes, of course
-thank you, first, how old are you?
-fifteen years old, Zoé ANSEWERED
-What's your name?
-my name is Zoé (tu devrais inverser avec la question sur l'age ;))
-what's were your link with the people fatality
-was my class, some we had the time of ran away, told Zoé ( je ne comprends pas le sens des 2 phrases..)
-Do you had recognize the murdered ?(là tu as mis la personne tué, je crois que tu voulais mettre le tueur : murderer)
-Vaguely(je ne sais pas si ça se dit), he weared one balaclava, he was big.(????)
-i had found throw flame.Why according to we griped a firearm, we test for hoped discover the fingerprints but who was give your teacher? ?????
-she was ran away with others pupil ?????
-Thank you SO much for your PRECIOUS HELP (en français on dit précieuse aide, en anglais on inverse adj et nom
-i wanted you help ???
-goodbye
A police station, the test were came, the inspector looked a fingerprint found. he looked in the criminal record.
he looked so the person correponded and one person corresponded. Was a man named Etan, he worked in high school as sweeper, he questioned, he said he had become crazy and he was tired of this work, he had an impulse ?????
La plupart du temps je ne comprends pas ce que tu as voulu mettre donc j'ai mis ???? . dis moi pour que je t'aide plus ;) et fait bien attention à l'utilisation de tes temps !
Biz
"-Hello! How are you? inspector asked kindly.
-Her can go better( POUR LE POINT D'INTEROGATION J'AI DU ME TROMPE)
-I can you ask some question?
-Yes, of course
-What's your name?
-my name is Zoé
-thank you, first, how old are you?
-fifteen years old, Zoé ANSEWERED
-what's were your link with the people fatality
-was my class, some we had the time of ran away, told Zoé ( LES PHRASES VEULENT DIRE QUELLE ETAIT VOS LIENS AVEC LES PERSONNES DECEDER ET CETAIT MA CLASSE CERTAINS ONT EU LE TEMPS DE SENFUIR)
-Do you had recognize the murdered ?
-Vaguely, he weared one balaclava, he was big.(IL AVAIT UNE CAGOULE, IL ETAIT COSTAUD)
-i had found throw flame.Why according to we griped a firearm, we test for hoped discover the fingerprints but who was give your teacher? ( JAI TROUVER UN LANCE FLAMME QUI SELON NOUS SEREZ L'ARME DU CRIME NOUS L'ANALYSONS POUR TROUVER DES TRACES DE DOIGTS MAIS OU ETAIT PASSER VOTRE PROFESSEUR)
-she was ran away with others pupil ( ELLE C'ETAIT ENFUI AVEC DES AUTRES ELEVES)
-Thank you SO much for your PRECIOUS HELP
-i wanted you help (JE VEUX T'AIDER)
-goodbye
A police station, the test were came, the inspector looked a fingerprint found. he looked in the criminal record.
he looked so the person correponded and one person corresponded. Was a man named Etan, he worked in high school as sweeper, he questioned, he said he had become crazy and he was tired of this work, he had an impulse (LA DERNIERE PHRASE VEUT DIRE: C'ETAIT UN HOMME APPELER ETAN IL TRAVAILLAIT AU LYCEE COMME BALAYEUR IL LE QUESTIONNA IL DISAIT QU'IL ETAIT DEVENU FOU ET QU'IL ETAIT FATIGU2 DE CE TRAVAIL IL AVAIT EU UNE IMPULSION ) MERCI POUR TA PRECIEUSE AIDE
-Her can go better( POUR LE POINT D'INTEROGATION J'AI DU ME TROMPE)
-I can you ask some question?
-Yes, of course
-What's your name?
-my name is Zoé
-thank you, first, how old are you?
-fifteen years old, Zoé ANSEWERED
-what's were your link with the people fatality
-was my class, some we had the time of ran away, told Zoé ( LES PHRASES VEULENT DIRE QUELLE ETAIT VOS LIENS AVEC LES PERSONNES DECEDER ET CETAIT MA CLASSE CERTAINS ONT EU LE TEMPS DE SENFUIR)
-Do you had recognize the murdered ?
-Vaguely, he weared one balaclava, he was big.(IL AVAIT UNE CAGOULE, IL ETAIT COSTAUD)
-i had found throw flame.Why according to we griped a firearm, we test for hoped discover the fingerprints but who was give your teacher? ( JAI TROUVER UN LANCE FLAMME QUI SELON NOUS SEREZ L'ARME DU CRIME NOUS L'ANALYSONS POUR TROUVER DES TRACES DE DOIGTS MAIS OU ETAIT PASSER VOTRE PROFESSEUR)
-she was ran away with others pupil ( ELLE C'ETAIT ENFUI AVEC DES AUTRES ELEVES)
-Thank you SO much for your PRECIOUS HELP
-i wanted you help (JE VEUX T'AIDER)
-goodbye
A police station, the test were came, the inspector looked a fingerprint found. he looked in the criminal record.
he looked so the person correponded and one person corresponded. Was a man named Etan, he worked in high school as sweeper, he questioned, he said he had become crazy and he was tired of this work, he had an impulse (LA DERNIERE PHRASE VEUT DIRE: C'ETAIT UN HOMME APPELER ETAN IL TRAVAILLAIT AU LYCEE COMME BALAYEUR IL LE QUESTIONNA IL DISAIT QU'IL ETAIT DEVENU FOU ET QU'IL ETAIT FATIGU2 DE CE TRAVAIL IL AVAIT EU UNE IMPULSION ) MERCI POUR TA PRECIEUSE AIDE
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Zoé reçu à l'hopital a questionné par un inspecteur. En français tu aurais voulu dire : Zoé a été questionné par un inspecteur, or là tu utilise le prétérit (passé composé) donc > Zoé was questionned by the inspector ou plus simplement : The inspector questionned her.