La présentation d'un collège anglais

A few times ago, Lots of students from the Trinity School (Lewisham) came to our Secondary School. On the first day, they presented their school. To begin, the school contains about five hundred students. Therefore, the buildings has a value of about 16 000 000£. it is a catholic school, and that's why every morning, they pray: Two days per week. All the school and the other days, in small groups of few students. On Christmas day/ Easter day, all the school gathers to the church. The school offers lots of hobbies ( or activities ) to the students. With that, they can pass the time. There is Football, Rugby… Moreover, if they want, they can practise scooting. The organisation of the subjects is different than in France. For example, they have French, physic and History the Monday or chemistry, maths, French and ICT( full words when said on the first time) Tuesday. According to the students, it’s not difficult to manage to stay concentrate when they have lessons. At the entry of the school, there is an interactive board which allows pupils to consult their schedule. It’s a modern school. The school works in a different way than France. For example, there are houses like in Harry Potter. Each student resides in a house and at the end of the year, there is a contest and the house which has the biggest number of points receives. That pushes the students to be at their highest conditions all over the year. Moreover( don't put it twice), prefect uniforms are in the school in order to help out the students. The pupils(yes) said that it’s very important and helpful. To maintain the peace between the students, there are some monitors/chaperons to monitor the corridors.Then, students wear uniforms. Girls wear black trousers or black skirts, white shirts, and black jackets. They also have a badge which depends of their house. Boys have a uniform a few different. They wear black trousers, white shot, black jacket, school tie but it also depends of the house. To finish, we can see that schools in England are very different than France: Their schedule, the school’s organisation, the hobbies offerED by the school, the uniform...


Bon bas je dois dire que ton texte est vraiment pas mal du tout et tu as un très bon niveau mais je parle americain donc je t'ai corrigé tous les "pupils" to "students" but it may not be worth changing every single one of them.

A few times ago, Lots of students from the Trinity School (Lewisham) came to our Secondary School. On the first day, they presented their school. To begin, the school contains about five hundred students. Therefore, the buildings has a value of about 16 000 000£. it is a catholic school, and that's why every morning, they pray: Two days per week. All the school and the other days, in small groups of few students. On Christmas day/ Easter day, all the school gathers to the church. The school offers lots of hobbies ( or activities ) to the students. With that, they can pass the time. There is Football, Rugby… Moreover, if they want, they can practise scooting. The organisation of the subjects is different than in France. For example, they have French, physic and History the Monday or chemistry, maths, French and ICT( full words when said on the first time) Tuesday. According to the students, it’s not difficult to manage to stay concentrate when they have lessons. At the entry of the school, there is an interactive board which allows pupils to consult their schedule. It’s a modern school. The school works in a different way than France. For example, there are houses like in Harry Potter. Each student resides in a house and at the end of the year, there is a contest and the house which has the biggest number of points receives. That pushes the students to be at their highest conditions all over the year. Moreover( don't put it twice), prefect uniforms are in the school in order to help out the students. The pupils(yes) said that it’s very important and helpful. To maintain the peace between the students, there are some monitors/chaperons to monitor the corridors.Then, students wear uniforms. Girls wear black trousers or black skirts, white shirts, and black jackets. They also have a badge which depends of their house. Boys have a uniform a few different. They wear black trousers, white shot, black jacket, school tie but it also depends of the house. To finish, we can see that schools in England are very different than France: Their schedule, the school’s organisation, the hobbies offerED by the school, the uniform...


Bon bas je dois dire que ton texte est vraiment pas mal du tout et tu as un très bon niveau mais je parle americain donc je t'ai corrigé tous les "pupils" to "students" but it may not be worth changing every single one of them.

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La présentation d'un collège anglais

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Bonsoir, voilà, je dois créer une présentation du collège jumelé avec le notre. Il ne me semble pas y avoir de fautes mais je souhaite tout de même être sûr qu'il n'y en a pas c'est pourquoi je fais appel à vous. Merci d'avance.

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A few times ago, lots of pupils of the Trinity School (Lewisham) came to our Secondary School. The first morning, they presented their school. To begin, the school contains about 500 pupils. Therefore, it’s small. The price of the buildings is about 16 000 000£. it is a catholic school, that’s why every morning, they pray: Two days of the week, all the school pray together and on the other days,they pray in small groups of pupils. On Christmas day/ Easter day, everyone goes to church. The school offers lots of hobbies to the pupils. So, they can spend a nice time. There is Football, Rugby… Moreover, if they want, they can practise scooting. The organisation of the subjects is different than in France. For example, they have French, physic and History on Mondays or chemistry, maths, French and ICT on Tuesdays. According to the pupils, it’s not difficult to manage to stay concentrate when they have lessons. At the entry of chool, there is an interactive board which allows pupils to consult their schedule. It’s a modern school. The school works in a different way than in France. For example, there are houses like in Harry Potter. Each pupil belongs to a house and at the end of the year, there is a contest and the house which has the biggest number of points receives gifts. That allows to give the best of oneself. Moreover, prefect uniforms are in the school in order to help out the pupils. The pupils said that it’s very important and helpful. To maintain the peace between the students, there are some monitors in theschool corridors.Then, pupils wear uniforms. Women wear black trousers or black skirt, white shirt, and black jacket. They also have a badge which depends of their house. Boys have a a little different uniform. They wear black trousers, white shot, black jacket,a school tie but it also depends of the house. To finish, we can see that schools in England are very different than in France: Their schedules, their organisation, the hobbies they offer , the uniform...

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