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Publié le 15 mai 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 15 mai 2011 dans 12A
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Raconter une bêtise faite étant Enfant












































































Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J' had four or five years and my brother and me decided “to garden”. There were beautiful plants in the plat band. I do not know what passed to us by the head: we wanted to transplant them. Then, after having to play some time, we were afraid of the consequences: my father was not to tend! Then, we positioned them back. Unfortunately, we were not good gardeners and we are not saw only had replanted we them with the roots in the air! When my father returned to the house, imagine its anger! And us? That finished with blows of trip hammer and an hour with knees, the hands on the head! Us n' ever started again.



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Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
When I was four or five years, my brother and me decided “to garden”. There were beautiful plants in the plat band. I did not know what passed to us by the head: we wanted to transplant them. Then, after having to play some time, we were afraid of the consequences: my father was not to tend! Then, we positioned them back. Unfortunately, we were not good gardeners and we are not saw only had replanted we them with the roots in the air! When my father returned to the house, imagine its anger! And us? That finished with blows of trip hammer and an hour with knees, the hands on the head! We never started again.


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