présenter florence Nighingale selon vocabulaires suivants

Publié le 26 avr. 2016 il y a 8A par Anonyme - Fin › 28 avr. 2016 dans 8A
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Sujet du devoir

description physique, pays d'origine, étapes marquantes de sa vie, parents : rich, educated English family, 1845 : decision to become a nurse = parents strong objection, 1851 : 4 months of training in germany, 1853 : superintendent of the institute for the care of sick gentlwomen London, 1853-1856 crimean /war in russia today, newspaper horrible conditions in military hospitals (crowed, dirty, cholera = main cause of death) , travels to the crimea leads a team of 38 nurses, very brave works day and night looks after injured soldiers, nickname the lady with the lamp, 1860 starts the first modern school for nurses at st thoms hospital London new technique of nursing = fonder of modern nursing

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Florence is also known as the lady with the lamp, was born in Florence, Italy on may the 12 in 1820.
Nightingale’s affluent British family belonged to elite social circles.
Her parents were rich and they have a strong objective, they were note pleased when she decided to become a nurse in 1845.
She was active in philanthropy ministering to the ill and poor people.
In 1851, she goes 4 months of training Germany and two years later she became. The superintendent of the institute for the care of sick grant, we woman in London.
Of 1853 at 1856 there was a Crimean war
There were horrible conditions in military hospitals because these places there’s been was too many people and the dint and the cholera are the main cause of death.
She travels to the Crimea and she leads à team of 38 nurses.
she was very brave, words day and night and looks after injured soldiers.
in 1860, she starts the first modern school for nurses at st Thomas’s hospital in London whom they are new techniques of nursing




4 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 26 avr. 2016

J'ai pas compris, tu veux qu'on vérifie si c'est bon (orthographe,...) ou on doit le finir?

Anonyme
Posté le 26 avr. 2016

Vérifier l'orthographe et le compléter car je pense que cela est nécessaire..

merci

il est important d'utiliser le vocabulaire mentionné dans le sujet

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Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2016

Coucou,

Voici ce que j'aurai mis:

Florence is also known as the lady with the lamp. She was born in Florence, a city in Italy, on may the 12th in 1820.
Nightingale’s affluent British family belonged to elite social circles.
Her parents were rich and they have a strong objection against Florence's decision about her future career. Indeed, they were not pleased when she decided to become a nurse in 1845.
She was active in philanthropy ministering to the ill and poor people.
In 1851, she goes 4 months of training in Germany and two years later she became the superintendent of the institute for the care of sick gentlewoman in London.
From 1853 to 1856 there was the Crimean war wich may be termed today the Russia war.
According the newspapers, there were horrible conditions in military hospitals because this places was crowded. Besides, the bad hygiene and the cholera are the main cause of death.
She travels to the Crimea and she leads à team of 38 nurses.
She was very brave, works day and night and looks after injured soldiers, that's why she's called the lady with the lamp.
In 1860, she starts the first modern school for nurses at st Thomas’s hospital in London where are born new techniques and modern nursing.

Voilà! Par contre tu as oublié de faire une petite description physique.

J'espère t'avoir aidé! @+☺

Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2016

merci pour les corrections. c'est vraiment très utile.


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