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Réaliser un e-mail défendant une association .Merci d'avance.
Pauline
Réaliser un e-mail défendant une association .
Merci d'avance.
Pauline
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E-mail:Everyone needs to do his part, to rescue animals endangered to keep the earth beautiful and take care of it for years to come.
Our association Sauver the pandas fights against the disappearance of the animal species, mainly the pandas.
The pandas make more and more rare.
Danger n°1:
For the panda, the first danger is the destruction of its environment of life. The men bring down forests to have some wood, to make for it of the farming,and to collect healing plants there is thus less and less bamboo.
Danger n°2:
The poaching: The huge pandas killed for their magnificent coat either die in traps which were placed to catch the other animals.
Result: there are no more than 1000 pandas of China in the world.
Danger n°3:
The activities of development as the construction of roads, the hydroelectric development and the mining activities.
Danger n°4:
The pollution, the global warming, the wastings also are to be taken into account
As we can notice it, there are several threats for these magnificent animals.
Several solutions exist to protect the pandas:
-The first work of ground consists in studying the ecology and the behavior of the wild pandas.
-The creation of new nature reserves.
-Patrols to fight against the poaching and the illegal forestry development.
-The pursuit of the searches and the surveillance
-Propose to the local peoples of the long-lasting alternative solutions
It is important to act as quickly as possible then help join us and our association save the pandas
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il est fait en quoi veut tu qu'on t'aide?
''It is important to act as quickly as possible then help join us and our association save the pandas'' = It is important to act as quickly as possible to save Pandas, consequently we need your help thus join us and our association..
Beh, j'aimerais savoir si il y a pas d'erreur syntaxique et savoir si c'est cohérent et compréhensible
Merci :) !! Sinon pour le reste c'est bon ?
de rien ; Everyone needs to do his part, to rescue animals endangered to keep the earth beautiful and take care of it for years to come. = Everyone has to do his part,to rescue animals endangered so as to keep the earth beautiful and take care of it for years to come
je pense que c'est tout..
je pense que c'est tout..
a ok
ranoo t'as bien corriger pour moi c'est ok
Ok d'accord !! Merci beaucoup quand même :)
Merci de votre aide :)
de rien :)
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