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Je dois faire une lettre destiné à mes parents de 2 paragraphes en Anglais, où j'explique pourquoi je veux quitter la campagne pour aller vivre en ville.
Voici la consigne :
1/ I explain what i don't like about my life
2/ I present the positive arguments of the new place
If I live in the countryside I want to move to the city and vice-versa.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voici ce que j'ai écris:
Dear Dad, my Mom,
I write because I am despair, I has much trouble in the countryside. I want live in the city, life is easier!
I do not feel well in the countryside, I feel lonely. I was tired of living with mosquitoes around me !
I need a dynamic life, and be with people and not the mountains.
To go to buy bread I must walk a lot I'm tired!
There is nothing close to home I want to live near shopping centers, cinemas, restaurants, the library, the theaters, the museum, bowling ...
In town I can meet other people, but in the countryside it is boring and there are no people to meet.
In city I can easily travel with public transport and in the countryside there is not much public transport.
I am never felt close to nature
I was tired of hearing all the cries of the morning cock!
In the countryside I have to wake me very early in the morning to go to school, I do to 30km with school bus I fed up !
I want live in the city rather with a herd of cows, I've always hated the smell of manure.
After if you like watching flies and admire a field that is your problem! But for me, the city is more attractive and I want to live there.
City life is beautiful, everyone is cool !
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C'est Dear Dad & Mom
on ne dit pas I feel lonely mais I feel alone
Autres arguments
A big city usually offers more jobs than a countryside does
In a countryside, most people do farming which is seasonal
people who live in a big city also enjoy a more convenient and perfect services of trade, health, and entertainment than those in a countryside .In a countryside, people usually have to cover a long distance to get things in the local market which is poor in products
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il faut mettre des linking words comme whereas , in addition , However ...
et enfin evite de répèter plusieurs fois countryside et city
Je te la réécrit en reformulant quelques éléments :
Dear dad, dear mom,
I write this letter to show you my despair. I have a lot of trouble there, in countryside. I think life would be easier if we live in the city.
Listen to me ! There's no one in the countryside, i fell alone. I can't have time with my friends because they live in the city. I'm fed up of living with mosquitos. I hate them !!!
I need a dynamic life, and live with people, not between the mountains !
When you tell me to go buying bread, I have to walk a lot. I'm tired !
There is nothing close to home I want to live near shopping centers, cinemas, restaurants, the library, the theaters, the museum, bowling ...
In town I can meet other people, but in the countryside it is boring and there are no people to meet.
In city I can easily take the public transport and in the countryside there is no public transport.
You know, I never felt really close to the nature. Remember, when you told me a lot of time, " Please, come with us walking in the forest" i answered you that i hate it and never i would come with you in forest.
I'm tired to hear every morning the crowing of the cock.
In the countryside I have to wake up very early in the morning to go to school, I have to do 30km with school bus !
I want live in the city rather with a herd of cows, I've always hated the smell of manure.
If watching flies and admire a field is your passion, that's your problem! But to me, the city is more attractive and I want to live there.
Hope you understood the message.
xx
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