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A few days ago, I had a very big surprise connecting me on to my account twitter. I'm a very big fan of Beyoncé, I know all (her) songs and we also have the habit of chatting together. One day she sent me a message to invite me to pass the week-end at her home, in a secret house in the united state. I was happy. I told my parents right away that I flew tonight. When I arrived to the airport I was welcomed by Beyoncé in person. And we are gone to her home on a private jet. We fly over the whole city. It was wonderful ! Barely if I put one foot in her house, she said : “go shopping in the most popular stores united states”. I had a great weekend with my idol. And for the last night before I go she decided to make me a little surprise. Two hours before I took my fly for the Reunion Island I found myself on scene with Beyoncé and Jay'Z to telling me they would in their turn fly with me and pass the summer in Reunion Island. It was really wonderfull.

(over the whole = autour du monde). Ce que j'ai mit entre parenthèse c'est que j'ai modifier mais ne suis pas sur de moi, le reste que j'ai modifier j'en suis un peu plus sûr mais je suis et reste humaine il peut y avoir des fautes que je n'ai pas remarquer dans ce que tu as fait. Je ne parle pas couramment anglais je propose juste ma correction que j'aurais fais moi même ^^

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