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Je devais faire une lettre a mes parents disant que les motifs ourquoi je fugué en cour d'anglais , s'il était possible que vous me la corrigiez . MerciOù j'en suis dans mon devoir
Hi Mom and Dad,I'm Fine , don't worry for me .
I send to you this letter for exlain my action .
I ran away of the house for many reasons one of them is that you forgot my birthday. This is not normal for parents . The second reason is that the day of my birthday , you scream over me .I don't like your rules and your authority , you are too strict with me . I'm clean my room, clean the table and do my homework after its i'm not allowed to play on my computer and i'm not allowed to hangin out with my friends . I didn't had trouble has run away because a fish lorry took me on the road and dropped me away from home . If you want me to come home , you need to change !
A boy who ran away , your child Adrian.
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Il N'y a pas de fautes ou d'erreur gramatical ? :)
Si il y a <>, tu devrais (perso) juste mettre <> sans <>, et ^(je suis pas sur si il l'est) << scream >> devrait être au participe passé. Personnellement encore, ma prof d'anglais préfère << so>> que << too>. On dit << set the table >>, pas << clean>. Au lieu de << after its>> je mettrai << and after that>>. C'est <>. L'expression du but ça serai plutôt << I didn't had trouble TO run away>>. A part ça, j'aime bien :)
Don't worry I am fine!
I am writing you this letter to tell you why I have run away.
I have decided to leave for many reasons. First of all, you forgot my birthday. And I can't forgive you for this, because you are my parents and you can't forget your child's birthday.
You keep yelling at me! I can't stand your rules and your authority. You are too strict. I tidy my room, clean the table and do my homework. But it's not enough for you. You don't allow me to hang out with my friends or to play videogames on my computer. Be assured that I am safe. A lorry driver took me when I was on the road and dropped me away from home. If you want to see me again, you will need to change your attitude towards me!
Love
Your son
Adrian
I am writing you this letter to tell you why I have run away.
I have decided to leave for many reasons. First of all, you forgot my birthday. And I can't forgive you for this, because you are my parents and you can't forget your child's birthday.
You keep yelling at me! I can't stand your rules and your authority. You are too strict. I tidy my room, clean the table and do my homework. But it's not enough for you. You don't allow me to hang out with my friends or to play videogames on my computer. Be assured that I am safe. A lorry driver took me when I was on the road and dropped me away from home. If you want to see me again, you will need to change your attitude towards me!
Love
Your son
Adrian
First of all,I want you to know that I'm doing fine so please don't worry for me.
I sent you this letter because I needed to explain my action.I ran away from home for so many reasons.First,you've screamed over me the day of my birthday and I felt terribly pained.
The second reason is that I truly don't like your rules and I can't stand your authority,you are way too strict with me and I don't think I deserve that ! Every day,I have to clean my room,clean the table and I have to do full of other household tasks.Plus,at the end of the day I need to do my homework and I have no free time to just breath.I'm not even allowed to play on my computer and hang out with my friends like every other teenage of my age.
I'm just done of you and your exigencies.
Anyway,I've done some hitchhiking and I've met a nice fish hauler who took and dropped me far away from home.
If you want me to come back,you need to know that I want you to change.
No other possible options !
Sincerely,
Your son Adrian.
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