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bonjour,
j'ai écouté une compréhension oral lors de mon cours d'anglais et ai dut faire un texte le résumant.
j'aimerai savoir s'il y a des fautes
merci d'avance !
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
This oral comprehension it's an interview for knowing the food habits of another person from a different country.
There is two characters, Ben who's from America and Marie who is from Japon.
During this dialogue Ben asked questions to Marie for knowing her habits.
And we learn that's Marie loves american food like hamburger and her favourites burgers is the "danish burger" because when she went to her university she takes it beacause he has blue cheese and with that she takes french fries but after she said that she replaces by salad because to her mind it's a little bit unhealty . Also she likes vegetables, raw or cooked but she justs can't stand onions and she thinks that it's probably the only vegetables she hates. For the dessert she loves all the things who are chocolaty like brownies sundae with a vanilla ice cream.
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This oral comprehension is an interview about between two people who are from different countries, and they talk about their food habits.
There are two characters -pluriel
Japan
asked questions to Marie (in order) to know her habits.
pas de and, juste: we learn that Marie loves... hamburgers.. her favourite burger is ..
fais attention à tes temps: when she used to go to university, when she goes to university? et mets le reste des verbes aux temps qui conviennent
because it has blue cheese
also, .. ou she also likes
it's the only vegetable she hates
she loves everything which are... like brownie sundae with vanilla ice cream
voilà ;)
Coucou, moi j'aurais dis ca comme ca :) !
This oral comprehension is an interview to know the food habits of a person from a different country.
There are two characters: Ben who is from America and Marie who is from Japan.
During this dialogue Ben ask questions to Marie to know her habits.
We learn that Marie loves american food like hamburger and her favorite ones are the "danish burgers" because when she went to her university she took one of those because of their blue cheese and with that she took french fries but after she said that she will replace by salad because to her mind it's a little bit unhealthy . Also she likes vegetables, raw or cooked but she just can't stand onions and she thinks that it's probably the only vegetables she hates. For the dessert she loves all the things who are chocolaty like brownies sundae with a vanilla ice cream.
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Salut,
1) Je suis pas sur de knowing. Je te conseille plutot de dire cela :
This oral comprehension is an interview about stranger's food habits.
2) Japan et non pas Japon
3)hamburgers (je pense qu'il vaut mieux mettre au pluriel
4) favourite ne s'accorde pas car c'est un adjectif
5) It has blue cheese
6) She also like me parait plus correct que Also she like
7) that it's probably the only vegetables ---> this is probably [...] vegetables
J'espère ne pas en avoir oubliée