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I don’t like to get up early,so my ideal school would begin only at 9am and would end at 3pm.,so we would have lots of time for after-school activities.
My ideal school would be very big and beautiful.there would be a big park on one side and a swimming pool on the other side.We would have a digital library with lots of useful books.we would als have a basketball court and a shopping mall.We would usually buy some food in the shopping mall.
We would a two-hour lunch break. .there would be a big eating room.We would be able to eat lunch and chat there. We would listen to pop music and would watch TV in the hall. We would eat fruits,vegetables and meat every day.
We would have English lesson every day,because I think English is very interesting .As I love computers, we would have computer training lessons every day after lunch.
I think my ideal school would be great.

Comme c'est une école idéale et qu'elle n'existe pas, il faut nuancer tes propos et les mettre au conditionnel d'où l'usage de would.

Voici ma correction du texte, je vois quelques erreurs. En plus il y a une trop grande utilisation de phrases qui commencent par We would et cela fait un peu lourd.

As I don’t like to get up early, my ideal school would start at 9am and end at 3pm. There will be enough time left to do after school activities. My ideal school would be very big and beautiful,there will be a big park on one side and a swimming pool on the other side. We would have a digital library with useful books. we would also have a basketball court and a shopping mall to buy food. Meals would last 2 hours in a beautiful and large room where we could also chat. We would listen to pop music and could watch TV in the hall. As English is a fascinating language, we would have English lessons every day. We could also have computer training lessons every day after lunch.

I think my ideal school would be great.

A Elisa : quand tu fais des corrections, au moins fais les correctement car tu as repris mon texte en faisant des fautes de temps...
Quand à mes soi disant fautes, il y a une omission et une faute de frappe... *
il faut lire We would a two-hour lunch break
we would also have a basketball court
Je tape vite... désolée l'erreur est humaine!