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La semaine dernière j'ai voyager en Ecosse avec la compagnie ''Secret Destinations'' , je crois bien que c'etait un de mes plus grand et beau voyage.
La compagnie a organisé tout le deroulement de la semaine, de la première seconde a la dernière, elle a pris en compte mes gouts et mes quelques problèmes de santé.
Je suis arriver là-bàs en avion, puis un chaufeur c'est mis a ma disposition pour me diriger vers mon hotel, qui était tout fabuleux que le paysage , des prestations incroyable pour un prix modeste.
Il fesait beaux, un soleil eblouissant, mes lunettes a la main ...
Et maintenant la description du lieux:
C'est un pays chaleureux, les personnes sont aimables et acceuillante.
Le paysage des montagne est plaisant a la vue et donne des instants de paix inoubliables.
La tranquilité est un des attouts les plus considerable de ce voyage, 2 jours après mon arriver je suis aller marcher dans les montagnes, j'ai decouvert des petits cours d'eau avec des poisson que je n'avait jamais vue, après des rivières avec des milliers de poissons.Pendant ma promenade j'ai était accompagné d'un guide fournie par ''Secret Destinations'' , qui ma expliquer des milliers de chauses: les fêtes qui aurait lieux, la nourriture typique; qui d'ailleurs est une nourriture tout a fait esquise.
Le 3ème jours je suis allais faire un tour de barque au Lochness ( la fameuse histoire est elle vraie ? ), une barque très jolie ou j'ai rencontré d'autre voyageur visitant l'Ecosse avec une autre compagnie de voyage , mais en tout cas ils était moin contant que moi de leurs acceuille, un hotel horrible et des activités ennuyante ...
Cette petite promenade ma relaxé de toutes mes semaines de travail en Amérique.
le 4ème jours aprés de longues heures passé au Spa de l'hotel j'ai dégusté d'aliments encore esquis, et d'une soirée autour du feux aussi, très plaisante et avec des rencontres spectaculaire, de gens simpatique.
Le 5ème jour j'ai découvert que se pays était un pays avec des milliers de légendes, des paysages encore plus époustouflants et si proche de mon hotel que mon voyage était en train de devenir un paradis de plaisir. J'ai visité l'Edinburgh Castel, un symbole sacré de la capital et promenr dans la capitale pendant quelques heures.
Le 6ème jours, mon dernier jour a était le plus fabuleux, la compagnie de voyage a organiser pour moi mes dérnières activités.
Un petiti dejeuner a Clarinda's merveilleux, où j'ai degusté toutes les patisseries possibles inimaginables a volonté.Une visite au Kelvingrove Art Gallery. Puis un dejeuner au Nice 'n' Sleazy, un bar extremement conue en Ecosse, encore un petit musée le ''People's Palace'' et la dernière féstivité pour moi un club, avec un ambiance plaisante et reposante ''Arches''.
Puis est arriver le septième jours , le chauffeur m'attender depuis 1 heure, a l'heure, j'ai pris l'avion pour arriver au USA. Et voila, j'ai eu un sejour trés calme et fabuleux, un compagnie qui a organisé de façons merveilleuse, je la recommande !




TEXTE EN ANGLAIS :

Last week I travel to Scotland with the company''Destinations''Secret, I think it was one of my biggest and beautiful journey.
The company has organized the entire course of the week, the first second to the last, it took into account my tastes and my few health problems.
I get there by plane, then a chaufeur is placed at my disposal to direct me to my hotel, which was all that fabulous landscape of incredible benefit for a modest fee.
It fesait beautiful, dazzling sunshine, my glasses in hand ...
And now the description of places:
It is a warm country, people are friendly and welcoming.
The landscape of the mountain is a pleasant sight and provides unforgettable moments of peace.
The tranquility is one of the most considerable Attout this trip, two days after I arrive I go walking in the mountains, I discovered some small streams with fish I had ever seen, after the rivers poissons.Pendant with thousands of my walk I was accompanied by a guide provided by Secret Destinations'',''explaining that my thousands of chause: parties that have places, typical food, which is also food quite EsQUIsE.
The 3rd day I went to a boat ride on Loch Ness (the famous story is true?), A beautiful boat and I met another traveler visiting Scotland with another travel company, but in any If they were less telling me that their welcomes, a horrible hotel and activities boring ...
This relaxed stroll my all my weeks of work in America.
the 4th day after long hours spent at the spa hotel food I tasted even clay model, and an evening around the fire too, and very pleasant encounters with spectacular people Simpati.
The 5th day I discovered is that country was a country with thousands of legends, landscapes and even more amazing so close to my hotel that my trip was becoming a paradise of pleasure. I visited Edinburgh Castle, a sacred symbol of the capital and promenr in the capital for several hours.
The 6th day, my last day was the most fabulous, the travel company for me to organize my past activities.
Breakfast at Clarinda's wonderful, where I enjoy every pastry imaginable was possible volonté.Une visit to Kelvingrove Art Gallery. Then a lunch at Nice 'n' Sleazy, bar extremely It was set up in Scotland, even a small museum''and''People's Palace last celebration for me a club with a pleasant and relaxing''Arches''.
Then came the seventh day, the driver wait for me for 1 hour, an hour, I took the plane to arrive in the USA. And voila, I had a fabulous stay very calm, a company that has organized wonderful ways, I recommend it!

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TEXTE EN ANGLAIS :

Last week I travel to Scotland with the company''Destinations''Secret, I think it was one of my biggest and beautiful journey.
The company has organized the entire course of the week, the first second to the last, it took into account my tastes and my few health problems.
I get there by plane, then a chaufeur is placed at my disposal to direct me to my hotel, which was all that fabulous landscape of incredible benefit for a modest fee.
It fesait beautiful, dazzling sunshine, my glasses in hand ...
And now the description of places:
It is a warm country, people are friendly and welcoming.
The landscape of the mountain is a pleasant sight and provides unforgettable moments of peace.
The tranquility is one of the most considerable Attout this trip, two days after I arrive I go walking in the mountains, I discovered some small streams with fish I had ever seen, after the rivers poissons.Pendant with thousands of my walk I was accompanied by a guide provided by Secret Destinations'',''explaining that my thousands of chause: parties that have places, typical food, which is also food quite EsQUIsE.
The 3rd day I went to a boat ride on Loch Ness (the famous story is true?), A beautiful boat and I met another traveler visiting Scotland with another travel company, but in any If they were less telling me that their welcomes, a horrible hotel and activities boring ...
This relaxed stroll my all my weeks of work in America.
the 4th day after long hours spent at the spa hotel food I tasted even clay model, and an evening around the fire too, and very pleasant encounters with spectacular people Simpati.
The 5th day I discovered is that country was a country with thousands of legends, landscapes and even more amazing so close to my hotel that my trip was becoming a paradise of pleasure. I visited Edinburgh Castle, a sacred symbol of the capital and promenr in the capital for several hours.
The 6th day, my last day was the most fabulous, the travel company for me to organize my past activities.
Breakfast at Clarinda's wonderful, where I enjoy every pastry imaginable was possible volonté.Une visit to Kelvingrove Art Gallery. Then a lunch at Nice 'n' Sleazy, bar extremely It was set up in Scotland, even a small museum''and''People's Palace last celebration for me a club with a pleasant and relaxing''Arches''.
Then came the seventh day, the driver wait for me for 1 hour, an hour, I took the plane to arrive in the USA. And voila, I had a fabulous stay very calm, a company that has organized wonderful ways, I recommend it!