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Je doi faire une redaction sur la vie d'un cow-boy je le fait mais je ne suis pas sur de ma traduction aide moi svpOù j'en suis dans mon devoir
L'autre chose tres importante était le chapeau tous cela me donner ma vrai personalité.Dans le village tout le monde me connaissait grace à la reputation de mon grand-pére .Je possédait 7 champs ou je mettais mon betails (40 vaches, 5 taureaux ,7 veaux,ainssi que 7 cheveaux)
Et oui c'est pas tous les jours facile, heureusement que j'ai mon fils Max qui m'aide après ses cours.Ce n'est pas sa grande passion mais il aime passais du temps avec moi, lui il prefére reste avec les cheveaux.
La climat est a 32°C chaque aprés midi bien sur il pleut mais quand il pleut se ne sont pas des petites averses (3 jours qui se suiven).
Les jours qu'il pleut on ne voit personnes dans les rue , je reste enfermé chez moi,je bricole , je m'occupe, refaire la cloture ....
Other thing tres important was the hat all it to give me my truth personalité. In the village everybody knew me grace about the reputation of my grandfather.
I possessed 7 fields or I put my betails (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 calves, so that cheveaux 7)
And yes it is not every day easy, fortunately that I have my son Max who helps me after his courses. It is not its big passion but he enjoy spent time with me, he prefére rest with cheveaux.
Climate is good noon on has 32°C every aprés it is raining but when it is raining are not small showers (3 days which suiven).
The days when it is raining we see persons in street, I remain locked to me, I tinker, I take care, redo the cloture....
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The most important are the hat (it gives my truth personality) .In my village, everybody knows me thanks to the reputation of my grandfather.
I possess 7 fields or I put my betail (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 veals and 7 horses)
The life is not simple, fortunately that I have my son Max who helps me after his courses. It's not his passion but he likes spending time with me, he prefers to stay with horses.
The Climate, every afternoon, is of 32°C. When it is raining they are not small showers (3 days which follow each other).
Somedays, we see nobody in streets, I remain locked to me, I tinker, I take care, I redo the cloture....
I possess 7 fields or I put my betail (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 veals and 7 horses)
The life is not simple, fortunately that I have my son Max who helps me after his courses. It's not his passion but he likes spending time with me, he prefers to stay with horses.
The Climate, every afternoon, is of 32°C. When it is raining they are not small showers (3 days which follow each other).
Somedays, we see nobody in streets, I remain locked to me, I tinker, I take care, I redo the cloture....
Other thing very important was the hat all it to give me my truth personality. In the village everybody knew me about the reputation of my grandfather.
I possessed 7 fields or I put my cattle (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 calves, so that 7 horses )
And yes it is not every day easy, fortunately that I have my son Max who helps me after his classes. It is not its big passion but he enjoy spent time with me, he prefers to stay with his horses.
Climate is good noon on has 32°C(je pense qu'il faut le convertir= 89.6°F) every after it is raining but when it is raining are not small showers (3 days which that follow).
The days when it is raining we see persons in street, I remain locked to me, I tinker, I take care, redo the closing....
voila!
I possessed 7 fields or I put my cattle (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 calves, so that 7 horses )
And yes it is not every day easy, fortunately that I have my son Max who helps me after his classes. It is not its big passion but he enjoy spent time with me, he prefers to stay with his horses.
Climate is good noon on has 32°C(je pense qu'il faut le convertir= 89.6°F) every after it is raining but when it is raining are not small showers (3 days which that follow).
The days when it is raining we see persons in street, I remain locked to me, I tinker, I take care, redo the closing....
voila!
Bonjour,
The other very important thing was the hat. All this gave me my true personality. In the village everybody knew me thanks to the reputation of my grandfather.
I possessed 7 fields where I put my cattle (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 calves and 7 horses)
Well yes, it is not easy every day, fortunately I have my son Max who helps me after classes. It is not his great passion but he enjoy spending time with me, but he prefers to stay with the horses.
The temperature is around 32°c, every afternoon it rains but when it does it is not a small shower (3 days running).
On rainy days, no one are on the streets, I remain at home, I fiddle, I keep myself busy, I repair the fence....
Voilà
The other very important thing was the hat. All this gave me my true personality. In the village everybody knew me thanks to the reputation of my grandfather.
I possessed 7 fields where I put my cattle (40 cows, 5 bulls, 7 calves and 7 horses)
Well yes, it is not easy every day, fortunately I have my son Max who helps me after classes. It is not his great passion but he enjoy spending time with me, but he prefers to stay with the horses.
The temperature is around 32°c, every afternoon it rains but when it does it is not a small shower (3 days running).
On rainy days, no one are on the streets, I remain at home, I fiddle, I keep myself busy, I repair the fence....
Voilà
Merci de m'avoir repondu mes j'ai trois reponses differte la quel pensé vous la plus juste????
Merci de m'avoir repondu mes j'ai trois reponses differte la quel pensé vous la plus juste????
Merci de m'avoir repondu mes j'ai trois reponses differte la quel pensé vous la plus juste????
Je suis modeste mais ma réponse est la plus juste:
au niveau vocabulaire utilisé
au niveau de la syntaxe anglaise
j'ai beaucoup plus de pratique de l'anglais que des collégiens (surtout quand ils utilisent un traducteur automatique).
juste un oubli: he enjoys spending time with me
au niveau vocabulaire utilisé
au niveau de la syntaxe anglaise
j'ai beaucoup plus de pratique de l'anglais que des collégiens (surtout quand ils utilisent un traducteur automatique).
juste un oubli: he enjoys spending time with me
D'acor je vous fait cofience mes "he enjoys spending time with me "je le met ou sa?
quand tu parles de Max (le fils)
j'ai oublié de corrigé une erreur, il faut donc prendre ce bout de phrase corrigée et la mettre à la place.
j'ai oublié de corrigé une erreur, il faut donc prendre ce bout de phrase corrigée et la mettre à la place.
mais a ton avis cenedra, elle devrait converitir les degré ou pas ?
Bonjour zore, je te traduis tout cela:
The other very important thing was the hat. All this give me my true personality. In the village, everyone knew me thanks to the reputation of my grandfather.
I had seven fields where I put my cattle (forty cows, five bulls, seven calves and also seven horses.
Well yes, it's not easy every day, fortunately I have my son Maw who helps me after classes. It's not his big passion but he enjoys spending time with me even if he prefers staying with the horses.
The temperature is around 32°C every afternoon. Of course, it sometimes rain and not just quick showers (lasts 3 days).
In rainy days, when we can not see anyone in the streets, I stay at home and fiddle, keep myself busy or repair the fence...
Voilà la traduction de ton texte ;)
Bonne soirée
The other very important thing was the hat. All this give me my true personality. In the village, everyone knew me thanks to the reputation of my grandfather.
I had seven fields where I put my cattle (forty cows, five bulls, seven calves and also seven horses.
Well yes, it's not easy every day, fortunately I have my son Maw who helps me after classes. It's not his big passion but he enjoys spending time with me even if he prefers staying with the horses.
The temperature is around 32°C every afternoon. Of course, it sometimes rain and not just quick showers (lasts 3 days).
In rainy days, when we can not see anyone in the streets, I stay at home and fiddle, keep myself busy or repair the fence...
Voilà la traduction de ton texte ;)
Bonne soirée
Je me suis trompée à la ligne 10 : C'est it sometimes RAINS et non rain comme je l'ai écrit.
Non je pense pas
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Le plus important est le chapeau ( cela donne ma vrai personnalité ).Dans le village, tout le monde me connait grâce à la reputation de mon grand-père .
Je possède 7 champs ou je mets mon betail ( 40 vaches, 5 taureaux ,7 veaux ,ainsi que 7 chevaux )
La vie n'est pas simple, heureusement que j'ai mon fils Max qui m'aide après ses cours. Ce n'est pas sa grande passion mais il aime passer du temps avec moi, lui il préfère rester avec les chevaux.
La climat chaque aprés midi est de 32°C. Quand il pleut ce ne sont pas des petites averses ( 3 jours qui se suivent ).
Certains jours, on ne voit personne dans les rues , je reste enfermé chez moi, je bricole , je m'occupe, je refais la cloture ....