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J'ai fais une redaction en français et en anglais, je ne suis pas de ma traduction en anglais pouvez vous m'aider a corriger mon texte en anglais. Merci d'avance.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
John est un adulte d'une trentaine d'années il vit seul dans un appartement de trois pièces .Il n'a pas beaucoup d'amis, mais le peu qu’il a, lui son fideles .Il travail cinq jours sur sept dans un petit collège en tant que surveillant .Il aime son métier même si il n'est pas remercier a ca juste valeur.Ensuite je vais vous décrire sa vie quotidienne.
Tous les matins le réveil de John sonne a 6H30,en sortant de son lit son premier reflex et d’enfilé ses chaussons ,sur son tapis préféré au pied de sont lit. Sans une hésitation John part à grand allure direction la salle a manger pour commencé a préparer son thé bien chaud. Ensuite il part a la salle de bain pour aller se brosser les dents en s’asseyant sur le bord de la baignoire ,comme tous les matins,
s’habille, se coiffe est se préparer pour partir au travaille a 8H00.Il part en bus au collège avec les écoliers, tout va pour le mieux même si il ne se fait pas assez respecté. A midi c'est leur de sa pose déjeuné il part faire ses courses pour pouvoir préparer son repas de midi. Vers 13h30 reviens au collège pour finir sa journée, après son diner il se dentent sur son lit et s’endort jusqu’au lendemain matin.
Et ainsi de suite pendant toute l’année scolaire.
John is an adult of around thirty years he lives alone in an apartment of three rooms .Il has no friends, but little which he has, him his fiddles .Il work five every seven days in a small middle school as watching .Il like his job even if it is not to thank has ca just value.
Then I am going to describe you his everyday life.
Every morning, John's alarm clock rings has 6:30 am, by taking out of his bed his reflex first one and of threaded his slippers, on his mat preferred at feet of are bed. Without a hesitation John leaves in big speed direction the room has food for begun has to prepare its very warm tea. Then he leaves has the bathroom to go to brush itself teeth by sitting down on the edge of the bathtub, as every morning,
Gets dressed, does hair is to get ready to leave in work has 8:00 am. He leaves by bus to the middle school with the pupils, everything goes for best even if he does not make respected enough. At noon it is them of the pose lunched .
And so on during all the school year.
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John is a thirty years old young adult. He lives by himself in his own 3 room appartment. He has not many friends but the little he has are devoted.he works five days a weekin a small midle schoolas a supervisor. He likes his job even if he is not as considered as he would like to.
Let me describe you his everyday life.
Evry morning, john's alarm clock rings at 6:30am, as he step out of his bed his first move (or reflex comme tu préfères) is to put his slippers on; slippers that lay on his favorite bed carpet. Without hesitating, John rushes to the dining-room to prepare his hot morning tea. Then he goes to the bathroom in order to brush his teeth sat on the edge of the bathtub like every mornings. after that he dresses up, brushes his hair and prepares himself to leave for work by 8:00am. He goes to work by bus with the pupils, everything goes for the best even if he doesn't impose respect enought. At noon, it's his lunch time, he buys what he needs for lunch. He gets back to school till the end of the class. After diner he relaxes on his bed and goes to sleep until the next morning.
J'espère que cela t'aide. EN revanche la prochaine fois essaye de ne pas passer par le français mais de construire directement tes phrases en anglais. Cela évite la francisation de ton discours et les faux amis. :)
Bon courage