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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour j'ai déjà posté un poste pour que des personnes m'aide pour les traduction et maintenant j'aimerai juste savoir si cela convient .

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voila mon texte :

Dear Melissa,

You like to be busy, moving, watching movies, doing theater and doing activities with your friends.The music is your passion and you love to eat.
First, with your passion and your many activities you have lots of choices about your future profession !
However, because you like and you practise the theatre you could become an actress.
Also, you could become food critic because you like eating.
Furthermore, you could also become musician because the music is your passion.
Finally, I advive you to play in musicals because it shall unite your passion for music, one of your activities: theater, and you could travel around the world.

Goodbye and good luck !

Your career advisor.