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Sujet du devoir
La population de Londres en a assez de la situation dans l’East End: criminalité, insalubrité,exploitation des enfants pauvres...
Le groupe de personnes à l’origine de cette protestation a décidé de s’adresser directement à la
reine Victoria, et tu es chargé(e) de rédiger la pétition.
Voici le plan qu’on t’a suggéré. Sers-t-en pour rédiger ton texte :
1) describe the situation,
2) suggest what is needed,
3) explain why it is needed.
Your Majesty,
The people in the East End…
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
voila pour tout vous dire je n'ai rien fait , je connais très peu de vocabulaire en anglais et je n'ai vraiment pas d'idées.alors si vous pouvez m'aider ça très gentil !
MERCI BCP !
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Bonjour Camillouuuu,
Voici le texte:
"the people in East End are fed up with violence.We can't understand as london citizens that so many houses are rubbish bins;we find incredible the number of illness in tht suburb.What do the authorities do for his polulation?it's a shame!We ask you to talk to authorities,dear Queen.And we hope they'll listen to you.
Voici le texte:
"the people in East End are fed up with violence.We can't understand as london citizens that so many houses are rubbish bins;we find incredible the number of illness in tht suburb.What do the authorities do for his polulation?it's a shame!We ask you to talk to authorities,dear Queen.And we hope they'll listen to you.
we would like more hospital,more money to take care about children,more baby sitters to help chidren when school is finished.
So we wouldn't be ill so many times;so there would be more tourism in london.We could feel in security with more policemen.We could make our houses more beautiful with new painting and flowers....don't give up us ,your majesty!
Cordialement,
Benjamin
Cordialement,
Benjamin
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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Miss Victoria,
I write a letter to you for more subject ( children, crime ...).
The poor children are exploited, this no normal...
Apres tu peux continuer en faisant des propositions ;; reds moi-le si tu as unn autre problème je t'aiderais ;D