Correction d'un exercice d'anglais

ce ke ta ecrit et deja bien
pas de truc a corriger

je pense que c'est bien

Y avait plein de fautes..

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

partie 1: he has become=he's become

partie2: people used candles, feathers ( quills) and ink to write.
They wore weird clothes and caps
they travelled by coach (horse-drawn carriages)
they didn't have TV, SUVs

ink to write: de l'encre pour écrire
pour + verbe = to + verb
ex: born to dance= né POUR danser

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminium, batteries. He is also a very good gardener. He has a green thumb (il a le doigt vert). He works for wall street but most of the time works on the internet. He does not work 90 hours a week anymore.

At the end of the 19th century, people used candlesticks, feather and ink for writting. Everybody used to wear weird clothes with cap and they used to travel with a coach. They did not have any TV, or drive a SUV because they were non existent at that time. I think that we now pollute more that we used to but our life conditions are much better.

A corriger : famili,bateries, is-become(impossible)il te faut la forme du present perfect simple à la place,used to + verbe+ candlesticks,at the ink, for write, wear à mettre au prétérit, travel au prétérit aussi, ne pas confondre catch et coach, didn't use to + verbe + TV, becAUse, sujet avant "didn't", il y a déjà not dans didn't, pas besoin d'en ajouter un, exist sans -e, live = verbe, life = nom, conjugaison de be différente de l'allemand ist, comparatif de good = better, (the best est le superlatif). Pour revoir le prétérit, tu peux aller sur mon site gratuit faire quelques exercices :
http://helpyourself.fractalweb.fr/preterit-simple--conjugaison-en-anglais.htm
Cela pourra t'aider pour les exercices à venir ! Bon courage.

"melanie1 - Exercice - Anglais - le 11/03 18h15 à rendre le 18/03/2012 "

=> pourquoi as-tu mis l'année 2012 ?
Tu penses redoubler ? ^^

Tu as été aidé donc pense à fermer ton devoir. Merci.

Becose! on l'écrit BECAUSE!
attention !

cc
va sur voila trduction
tu marque en français puis il trduit

Family *

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminiun cans , bateries...he became an excellent gardener too. and he works for wall street but mostly on the net and doesn't work 90hours a week anymore


at the end of the 19h century, people used to sandesticks with candles, a feather at the ink for write

Ton devoir est bien mais il y a plusieurs fautes d'orthographe et de grammaire. Par moment c'est difficile de comprendre ce que tu veux dire et pourtant j'ai l'habitude des fautes de ce genre car je suis bilingue et c'est très courant comme fautes en France.

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans,batteries ...He is become an excellent gardener too; and he works for Wall street, but mostly on the internet and he doesn't work 90 hours a week anymore.

At the end of the 19th century, people used to candlestick with candles, and they wrote with a feather dipped into some ink. Everybody wears old clothes with cap and they travel with a catch. They didn't watch television because electricity didn't exist in this epoch . I think now we pollute more, but our life is better.

Voilà par contre je suis pas 100% sure de la réponse car je comprend pas le sens de la ligne avec candles...

family et non famili
he works et non woks

Bonjour,

Voici les corrections que j'ai apportées à ton texte. Elles sont en gras. J'espère que cela pourra t'aider. Bon courage !
Richard and his familY recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans, bateries...He HAS becomeD an excellent gardener too ; and he woRks for Wall street but mostly on the Internet (IL FAUT METTRE UNE MAJUSCULE) and he does not work 90 hours a week anymore.

TO THE CONTRARY at the end of the 19th century, people used (J'AI ENLEVÉ « TO ») CANDLESTICKS with candles to BRIGHTEN, AND a feather and A BOTTLE OF ink TO write. Everybody WORE weird clothes with MANTLE and they TRAVELLED with a CARRIAGE. They did not use TV,SUV, electricity...BECAUSE THE LATTER (cela veut dire ces derniers) did not EXIST. I think NOWADAYS we pollute more but our live is better.

Personnellement c'est bien mnt corrige les fautes lol ;)

famili=family
woks=works
becose=because
ce sont quelques fautes que j'ai remarqué!

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans, bateries...He is became an excellent gardener too; and he works for the Wall street but mostly on internet and he doesn't work 90hours a week anymore.

At the end of the 19th century, people used to candesticks with candles, a feather at the ink for write. Everybody wear weird clothes with caps and they travel with a catch. They didn't use TV, SUV, electricity...because it didn't existe. I think at the present we pollute more but our live is best.

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminium, batteries. He is also a very good gardener. He has a green thumb (il a le doigt vert). He works for wall street but most of the time works on the internet. He does not work 90 hours a week anymore.

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans, batteries... Indeed, he has become an excellent gardener too; and he works for Wall street but mostly on the internet and he doesn't work 90hours a week anymore.

At the end of the 19th century, people used to make ligth thanks to candles, they also used feather and ink to write. Everybody wore weird clothes with caps and they travelled with a catch. They didn't use TV, SUV, electricity... because those things didn't exist yet. I think, at present, we pollute more than our ancestors used to but our life is better.

Quelques erreurs non corrigées: family, batteries, he has become.. works....they wore... travelled...because they didn't exist.
I think that we pollute more today but our life is better.
Continue et je corrigerai la suite.
Bon courage!

Richard and his family recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans and bateries...He will become an excellent gardener too; and he woks for Wall street but mostly in internet and he doesn't work 90hours a week anymore.

on the end of the 19th century, people used to candesticks with candles, and a pink and write feather. Everybody wear weird clothes with caps and they traveled with a catch. They didn't use TV,SUV, electricity...because it didn't existe. I think that right now we polluete more than before but our live ist better.

voila bsx si il y a quelque chose que tu ne comprends pas fais moi signe :)

Richard and his familY recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans, bateries...He BECAME an excellent gardener too; and he works for Wall street but mostly on the internet and he doesn't work 90hours a week anymore.

At the end of the 19th century, people used to candesticks with candles, a feather at the ink TO WRITE. Everybody WORE weird clothes with cap and they traveLED with a catch. They didn't HAVE TV,SUV, electricity...becAUse THOSES THINGS didn't exist. I think NOWADAYS we pollute more but our live is beTTER THAN IN THE PAST.

J'ai pas tout corrigé, je sais pas vraiment quel était le sujet, mais j'ai supprimé certaines choses qui sonnaient fausses et mis les corrections en majuscules. Voilà.

Richard and his FAMILY recycle paper, glass, aluminium cans, BATTERIES...He is become an excellent gardener too; and he WORKS for Wall street but mostly on the internet and he doesn't work 90hours a week anymore.

At the end of the 19th century, people used to CANDLESTICKS with candles, a feather at the ink for write. Everybody wear weird clothes with cap and they travel with a catch. They didn't use to TV,SUV, electricity...BECAUSE didn't not EXISTED. I think at present we pollute more but our live IS best.

Voila les fautes sont en majuscule. Fais attention au BECAUSE pas avec un O c'est une faute dite grave.

her Family* he become *
because it doesn't existe*
Lfe et pas live
Je pense que c'est tout :)

Pour les faute tu peux partir sur reverso c le meilleur site ke jconez pour faire des traduction assez presise c mieu ke google parfois

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