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Bonjour pour Lundi 4 Novembre je dois rendre un dm en Anglais, dans ce demain nous devons choisir 5 images qui nous correspondent et parler de nos goûts. Je pense avoir plutôt réussis mais je voudrais votre avis sur ce que je pourrais modifier ou votre correction. Merci par avance ;)Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voiçi mon travail :( image de l'italie ):
In first, I like this picture because I enjoy Italy. I go every years in this country because I have Italian origins. I love go in Italy because I switch off with my family, then I'm in found of the Italian food, I love pastas, Pizzas and Italian cakes. In my opinion « la squadra azzurra » ( the Italian football team ) is the best, in brief Italy is a beautiful country, and finally I prefer France because my family, my friends and my hight school is in this country that is why I live in France.
( image d'une manette de Playstation ) :
I choose this gamepad ( Sony's gamepad ). I'm crazy about Playsation 3, XBOX 360 and Wii. I love war game ( call of duty, Battlefield and Farcry ) but I can't stand Shocking games ( GTA, saints row ). I'm crazy about vidéos games because I love being alone and chill out, then I'm not addicted to my Playstation because I play 1 hour per day. I play at vidéo games since 2003 with my father, my friends or alone. I'm crazy about this gamepad because it's
comfortable. My first game console was the Nintendo 64 but I can't bear it because it's a old game console. To conclude I like it so I'm quiet and interest.
( image de Booba, celèbre rappeur Français) :
My third picture is Booba's picture. I choose Booba becaus I'ms crazy about the Rap ( rythme and poetry ). I like RAP US with Lil Wayne or Eminem but I'm crazy about French RAP with Rohff or Sniper. Then I crazy about Booba's clothes with a big jean and a cap. But a can't bear his tattoo because I hate tattoo. I listen french RAP since 2003 but RAP US since 2008, I love listening rap but I hate singing it.
( image de sport ) :
My last picture is about the sport because i'm crazy about sports, I like every sport, my favorite are moutaine bike, volley balle, football and Body-building. I enjoy doing sport ( moutain bike and fitnesse). My favorite sport players are Amstrong and Contador ( in moutaine bike ) and in football I love Pirlo and ribery. But I hate Amstrong
because he is a doped playeur. I'm crazy about sporty strong dans not doped.
(image de campagne) :
I like countryside because I love to rest and chill out, then il enjoy living close to nature and I can't bear global cities. I'm crazy about animals, my favorite animals are rabbits, cats and chicken, my uncle live in countryside and has a chicken, his name is Chacal and I'm crazy about him. I don't like global cities but I live in city because is very useful. Next in autumn I love harvest chestnut and toadstool with my family. In last I love my uncle's vegetable garden.
Voila je vous remercis par avance pour votre aide :)
Ps : Je suis en Seconde.
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( image de l'italie ):
I like this picture because I enjoy Italy. I go there every year (singulier après "every", comme everyone et everyday) because I AM FROM Italian origin (pas de "s"). I love TO go TO (toujours "to" après "go") Italy because I CAN BREAK AWAY FROM my family, then I'm FOND of the Italian food, I love pastas, pizzas and Italian cakes. In my opinion "la squadra azzurra" (guillemets anglais) (the Italian football team) is the best. In SHORT, Italy is a beautiful country. But I ACTUALLY (en fait) prefer France because my family, my friends and my HIGH school ARE in this country.
( image d'une manette de Playstation ) :
I chOse this gamepad (Sony's gamepad). I'm crazy about Playsation 3, XBOX 360 and Wii. I love war gameS (like "Call of Duty", "Battlefield" and "Farcry") but I can't stand shocking games (like "GTA", "Saints Row"). I ENJOY (répétition) vidEo games because I love being alone and chillING out. However, I'm not addicted to my Playstation because I play ONLY 1 hour per day. I play vidEo games since 2003 with my father, my friends or alone. I LIKE this gamepad because it's comfortable. My first gameS console was the Nintendo 64 but I can't bear it because it's aN old gameS console. To conclude, I like it so ???I'm quiet and interest??? (tu veux dire quoi ? "I'm quite interested" ?)
( image de Booba, celèbre rappeur Français) :
My third picture is a picture of Booba. I chOse HIM because I'm crazy about (pas d'article) rap (RHYTHM and poetry --je ne trouve pas bcp de poésie dans Booba, mais bon XD). I like US rap ( with RAPPERS SUCH AS Lil Wayne or Eminem, BUT I LIKE FRENCH RAP BETTER with Rohff or Sniper. Then, I love Booba's clothes : big jeanS and capS. But I can't bear his tattoo because I hate tattooS. I listen TO French rap since 2003 and American/US rap only since 2008, I love listening TO rap but I hate singing it.
( image de sport ) :
My last picture is about sport because i'm crazy (t'es beaucoup "crazy" je trouve ;) ) about sports, I like every sport, my favo(u)riteS are moutaine bike, volley ball, football and body-building. I enjoy doing sport (moutain bike and fitness). My favo(u)rite sport players are ARmstrong and Contador (in moutain bike) and in football I love Pirlo and Ribery. But I hate ARmstrong because he is a doped playER (donc c'est ton préféré mais tu le détestes ?). I'm crazy about STRONG SPORTSMEN/ATHLETES WHO ARE not doped.
(image de campagne) :
I like (the --pas sûre) countryside because I love restING and chillING out. I ALSO enjoy living close to nature and I can't bear cities. I'm crazy about animals, my favo(u)rite animals are rabbits, cats and chickenS; my uncle liveS in THE countryside and has a chicken, his name is Chacal and I LOVE him. And I love my uncle's vegetable garden. I don't like cities but I live in city because IT is very useful. Moreover, in autumn I love harvestING chestnutS and MUSHROOMS with my family.
( image de l'italie ):
I like this picture because I enjoy Italy. I go there every year (singulier après "every", comme everyone et everyday) because I AM FROM Italian origin (pas de "s"). I love TO go TO (toujours "to" après "go") Italy because I CAN BREAK AWAY FROM my family, then I'm FOND of the Italian food, I love pastas, pizzas and Italian cakes. In my opinion "la squadra azzurra" (guillemets anglais) (the Italian football team) is the best. In SHORT, Italy is a beautiful country. But I ACTUALLY (en fait) prefer France because my family, my friends and my HIGH school ARE in this country.
( image d'une manette de Playstation ) :
I chOse this gamepad (Sony's gamepad). I'm crazy about Playsation 3, XBOX 360 and Wii. I love war gameS (like "Call of Duty", "Battlefield" and "Farcry") but I can't stand shocking games (like "GTA", "Saints Row"). I ENJOY (répétition) vidEo games because I love being alone and chillING out. However, I'm not addicted to my Playstation because I play ONLY 1 hour per day. I play vidEo games since 2003 with my father, my friends or alone. I LIKE this gamepad because it's comfortable. My first gameS console was the Nintendo 64 but I can't bear it because it's aN old gameS console. To conclude, I like it so ???I'm quiet and interest??? (tu veux dire quoi ? "I'm quite interested" ?)
( image de Booba, celèbre rappeur Français) :
My third picture is a picture of Booba. I chOse HIM because I'm crazy about (pas d'article) rap (RHYTHM and poetry --je ne trouve pas bcp de poésie dans Booba, mais bon XD). I like US rap ( with RAPPERS SUCH AS Lil Wayne or Eminem, BUT I LIKE FRENCH RAP BETTER with Rohff or Sniper. Then, I love Booba's clothes : big jeanS and capS. But I can't bear his tattoo because I hate tattooS. I listen TO French rap since 2003 and American/US rap only since 2008, I love listening TO rap but I hate singing it.
( image de sport ) :
My last picture is about sport because i'm crazy (t'es beaucoup "crazy" je trouve ;) ) about sports, I like every sport, my favo(u)riteS are moutaine bike, volley ball, football and body-building. I enjoy doing sport (moutain bike and fitness). My favo(u)rite sport players are ARmstrong and Contador (in moutain bike) and in football I love Pirlo and Ribery. But I hate ARmstrong because he is a doped playER (donc c'est ton préféré mais tu le détestes ?). I'm crazy about STRONG SPORTSMEN/ATHLETES WHO ARE not doped.
(image de campagne) :
I like (the --pas sûre) countryside because I love restING and chillING out. I ALSO enjoy living close to nature and I can't bear cities. I'm crazy about animals, my favo(u)rite animals are rabbits, cats and chickenS; my uncle liveS in THE countryside and has a chicken, his name is Chacal and I LOVE him. And I love my uncle's vegetable garden. I don't like cities but I live in city because IT is very useful. Moreover, in autumn I love harvestING chestnutS and MUSHROOMS with my family.
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I choose this gamepad ( Sony's gamepad ). I'm crazy about Playsation 3, XBOX 360 and Wii. I love games about war like call of duty, Battlefield or Farcry but I can't stand crime games such as GTA and saints row. Even though I'm crazy about videos games and I love being alone and chill out I won't say I'm addicted to my Playstation because I only play 1 hour daily. I play video games since 2003 with my father, my friends or alone. I'm crazy about this gamepad because it's
comfortable. My first game console was the Nintendo 64 but I can't bear it anymore because it's a old game console. In other words, I like it so much it makes me quiet and interested.
My third picture represents Booba. I choose Booba becaus I'm crazy about Rap ( rythme and poetry ). I like RAP US with artists like Lil Wayne or Eminem but I prefer French RAP with Rohff or Sniper. Then I really live Booba's clothes such as a big jean and a cap. But a can't stand his tattoos because I hate tattoos. I listen to french RAP since 2003 but I only started to listen to RAP US since 2008, I love listening rap but I hate singing it.
j'ai la flemme de faire la suite, mais bon