devoir 3 anglais

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bonjour je suis bloqué au devoir numéro 3 d'anglais
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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Your Majesty,

The People in the East End was getting worse. East End living in terrible
conditions and we feared the worst!. The crime rate was rising. Children are
exploited, and families living in slums. Children are dying slowly and deadly
diseases such as rubella and chickenpox is a sore in the East End. The
population of the East End has had enough of these terms and encourage you
to act before it gets worse. We have added security to ensure the safety of all
East End. The police need to patrol as necessary to prevent crime. Other teas,
please send more doctors East End East to treat the sick and to prevent any
outbreak of disease. We also ask you to build more decent houses for families in
need to restore all existing housing in the East End. Beyond these measures, we
want to enforce a law against child labor and exploitation. All these measures
are necessary and would stop the violence in the East End and prevent
disturbances that might threaten other parts of London. We trust you to find a
solution to all problems mentioned above and are available to discuss it.

Most respectfully,
your humble subjects.