English. Aidez moi Svp :)

Publié le 27 nov. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 29 nov. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

You have just in England and you share a flat with two other students.
Introduce yourself, speak about your family and your hobbies, say what you like and finally speak about your habits and your personality

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

HELLO.
My name's Imene Machto.My last name is Imene and my first name is Machto.
I was born on the nineteen ninety six.
I arrive to england last month.
I have got two brothers Mohamed y nassim.The has gottwenty years ols and eight years old And one sister Elodie.She has got thirteen years old. They are so crazy!
Everyday i get up at 6a.m.
I usually play football.I everyday see t.v.
I always do computer.
I go to the swiming pool a soon as i have time.
I likes football and basketball.
I love hip-hop and i hate maths.
I very friendly and respect ful.
My parents think i'am talkative.



6 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 27 nov. 2011
C'est pas mal ! Il y a juste plusieurs fautes...
My name is : je ne pense pas que My name's puisse être utilisé
Last name c'est le nom de famille, et first name c'est le prénom
I arrived, utilise le passé...
Mohamed and Nassim. They (=ils) have (has = seulement pour he, she, it) got c'est pas obligé...
I like football and basketball : like est invariable
I am very friendly...
Soit I am, soit I'm, mais pas I'am... XD

Voilà, j'espère t'avoir été utile !
Anonyme
Posté le 27 nov. 2011
je vais un peu reprendre ce qu'a dit guilmetayer et rajouter des petites choses:
My name is
I arrived
I have (le got n'est pas nécessaire)
Pour l'âge c'est pas "have" c'est "is" donc they are twenty years old (pas de s a old)
She is thirteen years old
I everyday watch TV. (quand tu dit "regarder la télé" utilise "watch" c'est plus correct)
Je ne suis pas sure que le "a" soit nécessaire avant le "soon"
"like" ne prend un s que pour he,she,it
I am very friendly and respectful
i'm et non i'am
Voilà, j'espère t'avoir aider
Bon courage!
Anonyme
Posté le 27 nov. 2011
En gros c'est ce que je viens de dire ;)
As soon as... soon as, ça ne veux rien dire !

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Anonyme
Posté le 28 nov. 2011
ELLO.
My name's Imene Machto.My FIRST name is Imene and my LAST name is Machto.
I was born IN nineteen ninety six.
I arrive IN England last month.
I have got two brothers CALLED Mohamed AND Nassim. ONE IS TWENTY YEARS OLD AND THE OTHER IS EIGHT YEARS OLD, And one sister Elodie,WHO IS THIRTEEN YEARS OLD. They are so crazy!
Everyday i get up at 6a.m.
I usually play football.I WATCH TV EVERYDAY
I AM ALWAYS ON THE computer.
I go to the swiming pool AS soon as i have time.
I like football and basketball.
I love hip-hop and i hate maths.
I AM very friendly and respectful.
My parents think i'am talkative.
Anonyme
Posté le 28 nov. 2011
ELLO.
My name's Imene Machto.My FIRST name is Imene and my LAST name is Machto.
I was born IN nineteen ninety six.
I arrive IN England last month.
I have got two brothers CALLED Mohamed AND Nassim. ONE IS TWENTY YEARS OLD AND THE OTHER IS EIGHT YEARS OLD, And one sister Elodie,WHO IS THIRTEEN YEARS OLD. They are so crazy!
Everyday i get up at 6a.m.
I usually play football.I WATCH TV EVERYDAY
I AM ALWAYS ON THE computer.
I go to the swiming pool AS soon as i have time.
I like football and basketball.
I love hip-hop and i hate maths.
I AM very friendly and respectful.
My parents think i'am talkative.
Anonyme
Posté le 28 nov. 2011
pas le peine de répeter machto ,i arrived ( c'est le passé) , old not ols , every day ( tu doit supprimer le i ) , i always use the net ou i always surfing the net , i go to the swimming pool an saturday from 8:00 pm ( par exemple), i like not i likes ( playing the football and hanging out with my friend in the down town ( et j'adore me blader avec mes amis au centre ville))
i lot of speak with people , it's my passion!!!

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