Introduce yourself Pour demain , merci d'avance !!!!!!!!!

Sujet du devoir

Je me suis pésentée , elle m'a dit que c'était excellent , mais , qu'il faut encore dévelloper !!!!!!!!!!
Voici la présentation en question :

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

My name is Sonia . I am fourteen years old , I live in a town called near , it's in the north of France .
I have got two brothers and one sister .
My brothers names are " Yacine and Sofiane " .
Sofiane is younger than me , he is 7 years old .
Yacine is older than me , he is 15 years old .
My sister name is Sabrine . She is older than me , she is 18 years old .
I live with them and my parents .
My mother takes care of us , she is a housewife .
My father works in a laboratory .
My favourite sports are basketball and tennis .
I am keen on reading , " Guy de Maupassant " is one of my favourite writer . I also like " Blaise Pascal " .
I like a lot painting of Picasso .
I like going ti the cinema ( I often go the cinema ) .
I want become a neurosurgeon , but , it's a dream , I hope it will become true . I am just in 3ème .

Merci d'avoir lu !!!!!!