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Quelqu'un peut-il me corriger la fin de mon texte merci beaucoup d'avace pensez vous qu il est trop lourd?Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Otherwise she loves going to the cinema and watching some movies with her friends or her family. On her planet there are lots of differents movies because every day a new one is on the cinema. But the cinema is not the same as ours because when you watch a movie, you do not stay in your chair but you are in the film and you can be your favourite actor or actress. I think it is quite better. She does not like going to the theatre because she thinks it is boring and the shows are too long. On her planet the museums exist but there are not the same as on our planet, there are much better! On our planet the museums are often boring and exept if you are passionate, you think some museums are not interesting and the visit is always too long. But on her planet the museums are really special but attractive and interesting too. In the museums we can see a or some movies about the subject of the museum and the explanations are presented by 3D pictures and these ones can move and speak. The most of the time you can test yourself. For example how to do some chocolate or how liveda Viking and so on. In a Viking museum ,they would have a big show and the children could try to beat with a sword. The most of the museums are about the nature , the animals, the story (not the same as our)or the manufacture of something . The most imortant and the biggest museum on her planet is the Moon museum because the moon is their godness. We can also see lots of zoos , but of course there are not really some zoos because the animals are sacred and ehen youput an animal in a cage you do not respect him. It is better to call tis zoos some natural reserves. They chose a part of the nature and inside they have done some ways.She loves this reserves because the animals are free and they can do what they want. ( Even jump on your back or on your shoulder...)5 commentaires pour ce devoir
Hello merci beaucoup , tu penses que c'est bien ? moi je trouve que je n'ai pas beaucoup de voc et que le texte est trop lourd...
the explanations are made with 3D pictures
Non cela.
Tu peux rajouter des adjectifs comme entertaining : distrayant
animals are worshiped on her planet.
We can also see lots of zoos , but of course there are actually not many zoos because the animals are sacred and when youput an animal in a cage you do not respect it. It is better to call these zoos natural reserves. They chose a part of the nature and inside they built some ways (paths : chemins).She loves these reserves because the animals are free and they can do what they want. ( Even jump on your back or on your shoulder...)
Non cela.
Tu peux rajouter des adjectifs comme entertaining : distrayant
animals are worshiped on her planet.
We can also see lots of zoos , but of course there are actually not many zoos because the animals are sacred and when youput an animal in a cage you do not respect it. It is better to call these zoos natural reserves. They chose a part of the nature and inside they built some ways (paths : chemins).She loves these reserves because the animals are free and they can do what they want. ( Even jump on your back or on your shoulder...)
C'est pas mal !
Merci beaucou¨p !!!!!
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But the cinema is not the same as ours because when you watch a movie, you do not remain seated but you take part in the movie and you can be your favourite actor or actress. I think it is quite better. She does not like going to the theatre because she thinks it is boring and the shows are too long. On her planet the museums exist but there are not the same as on our planet, there are much better! On our planet the museums are often boring and exept if you are passionate, you think some museums are not interesting and the visit is always too long. But on her planet the museums are really special but attractive and interesting too. In the museums we can see one or many movies related to the topics of the museum and the explanations are made by 3D pictures and these one can move and speak. Most of the time you can test yourself. For example how to make some chocolate or how Vikings lived and so on. In a Viking museum ,they would have a big show and the children could fight beat with a fake sword (j'ai rajouté car il est pas réel). most of the museums are about nature , animals, the story (not the same as ours)or the making of something . The most important and the biggest museum on her planet is the Moon museum because the moon is their godness. We can also see lots of zoos , but of course there are actually not many zoos because the animals are sacred and ehen youput an animal in a cage you do not respect him. It is better to call tis zoos some natural reserves. They chose a part of the nature and inside they have done some ways.She loves these reserves because the animals are free and they can do what they want. ( Even jump on your back or on your shoulder...)